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Argus - and the Lady


Time was ticking away as I stumbled in the rain,
            My carriage was in a ravine, the coachman dead;
Oh the beautiful horses with their broken necks,
      I followed a light until I was knocking on a door.
Sheets of rain poured down on me from up above,
             Slowly the door opened as I stood dripping;
I fainted and I was lost in a sometime world.
      Slipping into an inky, dark, fathomless void.

Blowin' free in a dreamy, lovely, drifting place,
            As gentle hands removed my dress and petticoat;
Then I felt my corset and undergarments being taken,
      I really should protest, after all I was a lady of 1680.
For days in delirium, I heard myself softly muttering,
            The king will come, the king will come, the king;
I lay on a soft bed of furs before a blazing fireplace,
      The forest green with leaf and stream in the wild.

The warrior Argus tended to me for many, many days,
            He had found the carriage and buried the dead;
She is beautiful, he thought with growing sweet love,
      And then one bright dawn I opened my eyes.
Looking down at me was the most handsome man,
            And I was shamelessly aware of my nakedness;
I should be screaming was my first reaction in reality,
      Then the King's Guard was breaking down the door.

And I loudly yelled, "throw down the swords!"


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August 25, 2015

Poetry/Narrative/Argus- and the Lady
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All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Album Tracks
sponsor, James Fraser

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Reams Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Another fantastic write Broken Wing! Congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Your “Argus And The Lady” is excellent!! ((())) Congrats!! Sara
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October 15, 2015 at 2:29 AM
Wonderful poetic version of lovely album broken! Congrats on big win!
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October 14, 2015 at 10:32 PM
Broken, Congrats -SKAT-
Inman Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Hi BW, lovely write. I've read it several times.
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:08 AM
many congrats on your win Broken wings :-) hugs jan xx
Tor Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 6:01 AM
Excellent win Constance!!!!!!!!!!
Parker Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:37 PM
I was drawn into your story but then it ended to soon..I hope it is to be continued..good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 5:46 PM
Continuation of Cabin In The Forest Poem
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