Argent Rhapsodies

Argent Rhapsodies

Alabaster moon child 
 Tip toes across still waters
Trailing silver ribbons
 Singing pearl white
Argent rhapsodies
 
9-5-21
Contest: Bite Size Poem No 20
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Kingston Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 10:42 PM
Sam, I used to know a poem that read: "Two things can tear my heart in two. Moonlight on still pools and you" Your lovely poem brought me back to that one. This writing is pretty and ethereal. What a beautiful image it creates. I'm so pleased to have found it. I've read it three times. Again, it is lovely.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 4:31 PM
wow, I love this one, Sam. big Congrats
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Nice one Sam...paints a vivid image and a calming scene.
Kauffman Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much John. Watching moonlight on calm waters is so mesmerizing. For me it illustrates the playuful, childlike side of the moon! Sending you the blessings of a peaceful moonlit night.
Alex Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Attractive title and write. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Hi Chris! Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed a walk with my moon child and her silver song! Blessings to you!
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