Are You There, God

God, I’m so tired.
I don’t know how many years I’ve prayed,
but all I can hear 
are the sounds of my creaking knees 
and I can’t do it any more.

God, I’m so weak.
I’ve tried to be strong in the faith for so long,
but you’ve beaten me. 
The silence is utterly deafening. 
I can’t hear you any more.

God, I’m so angry.
Why don’t you do something about the hunger?
All I can hear are my own words
echoing around the room.

Oh. 
I got the message …

Written and posted October 13th 2015
For ‘Are You There God?’ contest
Sponsored by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 18, 2015 at 4:43 PM
Bill, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT
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October 16, 2015 at 2:01 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this exquisite write Bill!
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October 15, 2015 at 4:27 PM
Like your take on the them Bill many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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