Are We Are

Beside the breathless petting, love is a wonder timeless -- in loin with club I can see the pounding extended fierce yet open ended room for tenderness and caring beyond the physical sharing touch is a mystery overbearing the feel of a lively other all not silk also sandpaper we rub the nature raw finding depth as we soar meet me in the Rapture both near and mystically afar together we travel only when magnetically entangled are we are --

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/11/2024 12:55:00 PM

Yes there is more to 'our being' than sense and Flesh..And seeing Joe Dimino.' Sync and form Its all superceeded..Whatever we've wanted yet We often end up misleading, ourselves and others..I'd rather try simple love. And implore Revelation in homage to the One God.'

Joe Maverick
Date: 5/13/2024 1:18:00 PM

Amen Joe Dimino..Life is full Of challenges.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/13/2024 8:20:00 AM

I can only speak from my own experience, which may not be as rich and profound as many others: “Simple…” -- I hear you, Joe. But, in the real world, in the world I know, I know of no one who has come to Christ were it not for a complex, often very hard-fought journey. Jesus, a prime example! God takes care of the birds…but he does not build their nests nor throw seed in them to feed their chicks. Indeed, there are ways of making life less complicated, and loving God is the best way I know.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/2/2024 8:28:00 AM

Loved your poem. It flows so well with tenderness and emotion.

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/7/2024 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Have a great day my friend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/1/2024 4:56:00 PM

I enjoyed the fluidity of your poem, Joe. Your poem was both sensual and tender. I especially liked "touch is a mystery overbearing." Well written, Joe...wishing you a splendid evening, Sara

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2024 4:55:00 AM

Hi Sara; so pleased you enjoyed reading this work, and pointed out an expression of particular interest. Have a great day my friend!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2024 1:48:00 PM

Theres something very rhythmic and captivating about the way you phrase your thoughts, so beautiful and so touching! I love the way it flows too and how youv written especially “ I can see the pounding extended fierce yet open ended room for tenderness and caring beyond the physical sharing“‘love i see through these passionate lines! So heart touching! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2024 4:57:00 AM

Thank you, IE; your careful reading and encouragement is precious to me...have a great writing day my friend. Blessings!

Silent One

Date: 5/1/2024 12:31:00 PM

Love makes us into poets and I can see it has that effect on you.. a profound way to describe it my friend..

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2024 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Si; love is the hub of tender creation~ as apparently you see it also. Blessings my friend.

Curie Stark

Date: 5/1/2024 11:55:00 AM

Love is indeed timeless

Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2024 4:59:00 AM

Timeless and endless.... Thank you, Curie. Have a wonderful day!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2024 9:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. Love your line, "also sandpaper we rub the nature raw." Have a wonderful day writing away...........