Are We All But a Number

                            In this world and in this life 
                        (Are we all just another number)
                                 A tax statistic or 
                      a corporation's itemized figure.
                    There are of pluses and negatives.
    The accounting of the additions and then the subtractions.
                  These are the balance sheets of life.
                       
                      This is with "gains, and losses." 
                 Is that the higher plan for mortal man
                      existence on this dusty earth?

                             A salary, or no salary.
                      A bank account, or no accounts.
                            Zeros and Ones, 1, 0.
        Added together are they supposed to be fine gold? 
                            A man’s worth weighed
                  on a numbered scale of more or less. 
        Were we created to be only digital number notations?
                                         
          Numbers in hourglasses filled with very fine earthly sand.
                  Grains of sand running then emptying,
                                into the canvas of time.
        This of a dusty dust, not solely returning to the ground.
    For, we are very, much, much more: than that which is ever seen.
                    "Yes, yet, not solely just numbers, indeed!"
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Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 5:43 PM
Ronald, congratulations on your poem being featured on the PS homepage. Very thoughtful treatment of a sensitive subject. We all sometimes feel that is all we are doing...working for someone else's bottom line. Well done!
Williams Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Chula. Amen, Bessings.
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:41 PM
We are certainly not meant to be numbers. I like how you ponder this dilemma that modern society has hoisted on us.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Yes, Andrea, out of temporary pains there are gains, like food for thoughts. Take care, blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 1:25 PM
A worthy contemplation. I believe a man's net worth is best determined by his relationship. Especially if they carry forward to the next world.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Yes, Richard I agree relationships are very important. Especially with and concerning the Lord. Amen
Staton Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:14 PM
You are correct in your assessment. Our entry and departure are governed by numbers. When we enter those pearly gates no numbers anymore... Enjoyed reading your poetry.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Amen, Valerie Staton, Thanks for your comment. Also, when you have some time visit my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:46 PM
Ronald, you gave me something to ponder. I also wonder if we are only a number. Enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend. God Bless you.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Amen, Darlene, as the Lord and the poem would have you ponder. Blessings
Whitmore Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 11:41 AM
When reading this I feel the question linger and trickle into the time value of each grain. An excellent poem with statistical mortal mans coexistence involving payments. Economical poem that takes my thoughts about life places. Thanks!
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Kristina, God Bless. Also, when you you get a chance please also view my website and comment. Wwww.jesuschristvisitation.net
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Enjoyed your poem. Interesting juggling of thoughts. Well done, Ronald.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Line, I did try to express myself there. Amen, also when you get a chance visit www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Tripp Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 12:08 AM
I hope there is a higher plan...still trying to figure that out myself, but the prognosis is not looking so good. This write is awesome and chills to the core. Sadly is tax time and we all get to see our "net worth".
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Well put Rhoda. Thanks, for the comment. When you get some extra time visit www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Rigoler Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Yes, in one sense we have all been reduced to numbers – even our DNA and guess who is responsible for that!? Of course God does not see us as mere numbers but as persons. Thanks for stopping by. / M
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:31 PM
Yes, God does works with numbers but with Him it is all good. Amen. Also, view my website www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Williams Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:04 AM
You are so correct Ronald. A great insight into life on this planet in your poem. You so rightly infer that we are just stock and collateral from birth to be struck from the register at death - And yet human rights are constantly violated world wide.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Yes, as you know that Jesus Christ is our perfect example.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Such wise musings, Ronald. You pose existential questions that causes a soul to ponder deep things in the earth. A GREAT ending, my dear friend. A powerful poem on all levels of comprehension. Stay blessed, less stressed. Love and peace always.
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Thanks Freddie, God Bless.
Masta Rj Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Was I created to be only as such, just to be a number. well said
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Thanks Maphatlalatse, www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Fiery Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 7:26 AM
I wish we could be more than just numbers but modern world has turned into just numbers..I enjoyed your write and I hope to be back again..excellent pen ! ~Cheers~
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:10 AM
I also, believe that this is a spiritual battle. As, noted in the book of Revelation, note: the number of the beast. The focus on numbers. www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Whitmore Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Thank you for your comment on my poem The Beyond. That was a underlying message of belief that I did wish to reveal when read. This poem touches so much on the reality of prices and values upon life. With the use of mortal man's existence as such imagery to a short life full of temporary choices and it has inspired me to write. Have a great day!
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Hi Kristina, yes I wrote it because wanted to put it out there if no else would. Amen, www.jesuschristvisitation.net
Evans Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:22 AM
You prick the conscious with this poem. Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing..............peace!
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Yes, Richard, I will was certainly doing that, and I believe the Lord and the Spirit as well. Amen
Shaw Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:33 PM
Sadly Ronald we are all numbers, but to our loved ones special numbers, I enjoyed your write, regards, Kevin
Williams Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Made just two adjustments. I believe that it is smoother and even more better at this time. Amen, blessings.
Williams Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Recently touched up. Thanks
Williams Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Thanks Kevin, Yes to our love ones we certainly are more then numbers. Amen But sadly as you agree this world diminishes us, our things and can our relationships also. visit my website when you get a chance www.jesuschristvisitation.net
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