Ardour's Cloth

When love becomes a masochistic moth
That yearns to feel the heat of passion's flame,
It chews a hole through sheets of ardour's cloth.

Its wings ignite, too close to blazing shame;
They glow at first with fervour as they feign
A beauty that becomes a painful game.

The tears can't quell the heat or halt the pain.
They fall to feed the weeds of sprouting dread
And drench the heart with beads of acid rain.

But rest assured that time will smooth and spread
The memories into the shrouded past
And stitch the lesions with a healing thread.

The day will come when joy will blink awake
To leach the sorrow from that phantom ache.


For Craig's "Terza Rima Sonnet" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Morgan Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Congrats on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on your great winning work...Sara
Muzzey Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations Heather, on placing 1st in the contest with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~Caryl
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
A  Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 7:01 PM
a well done poem.... Congrats ~SKAT~
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 6:45 PM
So glad to see this one in the top spot! Still love it another 7 this one deserves 14.
Jordan Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 5:11 PM
This is wonderful! A moth as metaphor for love... beautiful. A much deserved win. Congratulations... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 4:14 PM
the same thought came into my mind that came into it first time I ever saw this: wow! amazing. And congrats. First in my contest and now this one. You are rocking it.
Henshaw Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 2:29 PM
A promising ending, love the line 'the beauty.......game' Fascinating. Henshaw.
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 1:58 PM
soupmail. (I have it now!!)
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 12:54 PM
what a smooth and powerful gem this is, heather...you really wing it; superb wprd choice!..:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Forgot to give you your deserved 7 rating.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Another on for my favorites Heather. This is a particularly majestic piece. I lack words to describe how amazing the imagery is. You have flown on flamed wings and all I can do is let out a sigh of awe!
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 1:39 AM
wow, Heather. you are simply amazing!
Tacito Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Favorite. Real talk. This is by far your best work yet. Like others have & others will state: "Masochistic moth" <-- extremely hard hitting metaphor. The Metaphor gods are weeping in the corner because of all the awesome contained in those 2 words. Damn.
Ober Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 9:49 AM
Haha! Metaphor gods - love that! Thanks, Drake :) Brought a big smile to my face this morning.
Dom Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Heather - I like, very. Your 'masochistic moth' is brilliant, and 'To leach the sorrow from that phantom ache.'...Wow!
Jennings Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 6:53 PM
masochistic moth, awesome words dear
Rhinem Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 6:28 PM
`Wisdom,` Weaved It's Own Cloth When Forming This Flesh ? Surely, Joy Shall One Day Rise From It's Ashes ~ Love, John
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