Ardent Love Affair

Hey baby. A world of endless awaking moments. With just you.
Come on baby, under gold dust and black-velvet sky. With just you.

Hey baby. Wave of ember flames, passionate eyes so sensuous,
I can't get enough being tangled, bare, wondrous high. With just you.

Fluttering butterflies arouses lambent ardent love affair,
flowering within me, baby, a lull comfort cry. With just you.

Hey baby, I dream of balmy rhythm breathes, the dawns yet to come,
numb kisses, great love, piece of fragment world left awry. With just you.

I crave not just a dream, but a life of forever, never death.
Bathe in sun's hypnotic spell before it hurries by. With just you.



9/11/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/6/2024 11:30:00 AM
Such a beautiful, sensual, romantic poem of commitment and hope for life, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 9/15/2020 10:07:00 AM
A beautiful, tender and romantic write of present and future hopes in a relationship, Eve. Congrats and Kudos on your winning placement my friend!
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Date: 9/13/2020 1:44:00 PM
I did not know more than one word could be used as the refrain at the end of line two of each couplet. I think it is nice to do it that way. I sure did struggle trying to put mine together with the one word I chose! So romantic, Eve. Now you have me wondering if there was a syllable count requirement. If so, I hope I am not too late for an edit.
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Date: 9/12/2020 4:57:00 PM
A soulful romantic Ghazal. I liked "I crave not just a dream, but a life of forever". Best wishes in SO's contest. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 9/12/2020 9:43:00 AM
- Awww... beautiful written, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2020 2:26:00 AM
Well done Eve. An excellent ghazal. It will rate high. ~~
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Date: 9/11/2020 11:13:00 PM
Melts the heart! :)
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