Eve Roper Poet Ghazal

Ardent Love Affair

Hey baby. A world of endless awaking moments. With just you.
Come on baby, under gold dust and black-velvet sky. With just you.

Hey baby. Wave of ember flames, passionate eyes so sensuous,
I can't get enough being tangled, bare, wondrous high. With just you.

Fluttering butterflies arouses lambent ardent love affair,
flowering within me, baby, a lull comfort cry. With just you.

Hey baby, I dream of balmy rhythm breathes, the dawns yet to come,
numb kisses, great love, piece of fragment world left awry. With just you.

I crave not just a dream, but a life of forever, never death.
Bathe in sun's hypnotic spell before it hurries by. With just you.



9/11/2020

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Sam Kauffman February 6, 2024 at 11:30 AM Such a beautiful, sensual, romantic poem of commitment and hope for life, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Sam Kauffman September 15, 2020 at 10:07 AM A beautiful, tender and romantic write of present and future hopes in a relationship, Eve. Congrats and Kudos on your winning placement my friend!

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2020 at 1:44 PM I did not know more than one word could be used as the refrain at the end of line two of each couplet. I think it is nice to do it that way. I sure did struggle trying to put mine together with the one word I chose! So romantic, Eve. Now you have me wondering if there was a syllable count requirement. If so, I hope I am not too late for an edit.

John Watt September 12, 2020 at 4:57 PM A soulful romantic Ghazal. I liked "I crave not just a dream, but a life of forever". Best wishes in SO's contest. Hugs ~ John

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2020 at 9:43 AM - Awww... beautiful written, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar September 12, 2020 at 2:26 AM Well done Eve. An excellent ghazal. It will rate high. ~~

Arthur Vaso September 11, 2020 at 11:13 PM Melts the heart! :)