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Ardent Love Affair

Hey baby. A world of endless awaking moments. With just you. Come on baby, under gold dust and black-velvet sky. With just you. Hey baby. Wave of ember flames, passionate eyes so sensuous, I can't get enough being tangled, bare, wondrous high. With just you. Fluttering butterflies arouses lambent ardent love affair, flowering within me, baby, a lull comfort cry. With just you. Hey baby, I dream of balmy rhythm breathes, the dawns yet to come, numb kisses, great love, piece of fragment world left awry. With just you. I crave not just a dream, but a life of forever, never death. Bathe in sun's hypnotic spell before it hurries by. With just you. 9/11/2020

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/6/2024 11:30:00 AM

Such a beautiful, sensual, romantic poem of commitment and hope for life, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/15/2020 10:07:00 AM

A beautiful, tender and romantic write of present and future hopes in a relationship, Eve. Congrats and Kudos on your winning placement my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2020 1:44:00 PM

I did not know more than one word could be used as the refrain at the end of line two of each couplet. I think it is nice to do it that way. I sure did struggle trying to put mine together with the one word I chose! So romantic, Eve. Now you have me wondering if there was a syllable count requirement. If so, I hope I am not too late for an edit.