Ardent Desires

To fall in love with you is a desire
             
  To fulfilll that desire is my dream
       
Alas ! This dream is a M I R A G E 




Red
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Callus Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:12 PM
I will give you a drink of encouragement, Smriti, and perhaps that mirage will turn into reality...unless it has already come true! :) hugs // paul
Nair Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:45 PM
I fell and skipped a beat This desire is no charade Mired in the mirage-
Manassian Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 8:33 AM
Red, dreams are beautiful too. You write very beautifully and with your heart. Without dreams it is hard to survive in the desert of life. Take care....
Fiery Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Eileen :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:46 AM
I woder if mirages were made to cause people in the desert to push a bit further and possibly press on until they find the real thing.
Fiery Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Richard :)
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