Architects Warning

“Oh Prisoner,” Warned the architect, “I mean no disrespect. But you can’t climb out of jail; These walls aren’t built to scale.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Good one..Enjoyed the humor..He might apply some musical notes and use them for a rope..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Yes the word is hoar's frost..I did 'oar's leaving off the h..Thanks...Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 4:36 PM
funny stuff!!
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:38 PM
ACES, James! What a clever play on words. Very, very creative and funny limerick. Way to go! (Did you mean "no disrespect?) Love this one. Best wishes, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:03 PM
Nice write on the architects warning
Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:38 PM
A short write, but a good one. I have one question: In your third line, did you really want to include "no" instead of "on"?
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