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Arboriginal

Spring’s budding, branching arbors,
saplings to sappy seniors,
are all stalwarts with ringed hearts
and life giving leaves.


(inspired by Francine Roberts' contest) 5/24/11

Copyright © Robert A. Dufresne | Year Posted 2011

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Gary Fields Date: 6/16/2011 5:05:00 AM This is a green-print and ronovation for new hope for all the world! Defineatly deserves a follow up.................. This is an important peace of work! Have you discovered what you have written, as of yet! Check it out! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 5/29/2011 6:59:00 AM Thought it said aboriginal too, Robert. Gotta love those trees with their "life giving leaves". Heartbreaking when people cut them down for aesthetic reasons. Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/28/2011 11:20:00 AM lovely touch with the squirts of alliteration in your Dodoitsu Robert.. Good luck for the contest, love Wilma Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 5/27/2011 1:13:00 PM I love the alliteration as well as the message Robert. Thank you for your comment on my Ego poem. I had originally written it for the "I am bored with___" contest and was the only entry that didn't win. Something to think about. Good luckin Francine's contest with your fine dodoitsu! Best to you, Diane Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 5/26/2011 4:40:00 PM At first glance I read Aboriginees! Very COOL! Login to Reply Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 5/26/2011 4:42:00 PM Aborigines whatever ! Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 5/26/2011 4:42:00 PM Aborigines whatever !

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/26/2011 10:37:00 AM Robert, good luck in francine's contest... I feel the isolation waiting to happen... life is so civilized giving us more to breath..... enjoyed your poem,..p.d. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/26/2011 7:23:00 AM great inspiration for a contest Robert~luv*SKAT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/25/2011 7:39:00 PM this sounds really cool, Robert. I much ejoyed reading it. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/25/2011 5:07:00 PM wonderful and very creative piece of poetry. Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 5/25/2011 12:11:00 PM Nice one...good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/25/2011 8:10:00 AM Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I totally enjoyed reading it Robert. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/25/2011 6:24:00 AM Very good poem here Robert on the theme of Trees.Enjoyed. Will do good in the contest.... Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/25/2011 2:54:00 AM highy impressive with lively images, robert... like your unintented sparks of alliteration.. winning's best top you! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/24/2011 9:03:00 PM Very creative, Rob. I like the analogy of the tree's "year rings" to the seniors. I'm getting up there so I can relate to this. Great entry for Francine's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply