Arboriginal

This is a green-print and ronovation for new hope for all the world! Defineatly deserves a follow up.................. This is an important peace of work! Have you discovered what you have written, as of yet! Check it out! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Thought it said aboriginal too, Robert. Gotta love those trees with their "life giving leaves". Heartbreaking when people cut them down for aesthetic reasons. Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki

lovely touch with the squirts of alliteration in your Dodoitsu Robert.. Good luck for the contest, love Wilma

I love the alliteration as well as the message Robert. Thank you for your comment on my Ego poem. I had originally written it for the "I am bored with___" contest and was the only entry that didn't win. Something to think about. Good luckin Francine's contest with your fine dodoitsu! Best to you, Diane

At first glance I read Aboriginees! Very COOL!

Robert, good luck in francine's contest... I feel the isolation waiting to happen... life is so civilized giving us more to breath..... enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

great inspiration for a contest Robert~luv*SKAT

this sounds really cool, Robert. I much ejoyed reading it. Luv, Andrea

wonderful and very creative piece of poetry.

Nice one...good luck in the contest!

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I totally enjoyed reading it Robert. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Very good poem here Robert on the theme of Trees.Enjoyed. Will do good in the contest....

highy impressive with lively images, robert... like your unintented sparks of alliteration.. winning's best top you! :) huggs, nette

Very creative, Rob. I like the analogy of the tree's "year rings" to the seniors. I'm getting up there so I can relate to this. Great entry for Francine's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn