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Arboriginal

Spring’s budding, branching arbors, saplings to sappy seniors, are all stalwarts with ringed hearts and life giving leaves. (inspired by Francine Roberts' contest) 5/24/11

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Gary Fields

Date: 6/16/2011 5:05:00 AM

This is a green-print and ronovation for new hope for all the world! Defineatly deserves a follow up.................. This is an important peace of work! Have you discovered what you have written, as of yet! Check it out! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/29/2011 6:59:00 AM

Thought it said aboriginal too, Robert. Gotta love those trees with their "life giving leaves". Heartbreaking when people cut them down for aesthetic reasons. Best wishes to you and yours, Mikki

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/28/2011 11:20:00 AM

lovely touch with the squirts of alliteration in your Dodoitsu Robert.. Good luck for the contest, love Wilma

Diane Locksley

Date: 5/27/2011 1:13:00 PM

I love the alliteration as well as the message Robert. Thank you for your comment on my Ego poem. I had originally written it for the "I am bored with___" contest and was the only entry that didn't win. Something to think about. Good luckin Francine's contest with your fine dodoitsu! Best to you, Diane

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 5/26/2011 4:40:00 PM

At first glance I read Aboriginees! Very COOL!

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 5/26/2011 4:42:00 PM

Aborigines whatever !

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 5/26/2011 4:42:00 PM

Aborigines whatever !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 10:37:00 AM

Robert, good luck in francine's contest... I feel the isolation waiting to happen... life is so civilized giving us more to breath..... enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2011 7:23:00 AM

great inspiration for a contest Robert~luv*SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2011 7:39:00 PM

this sounds really cool, Robert. I much ejoyed reading it. Luv, Andrea

James Foulk

Date: 5/25/2011 5:07:00 PM

wonderful and very creative piece of poetry.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/25/2011 12:11:00 PM

Nice one...good luck in the contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 8:10:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I totally enjoyed reading it Robert. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 5/25/2011 6:24:00 AM

Very good poem here Robert on the theme of Trees.Enjoyed. Will do good in the contest....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2011 2:54:00 AM

highy impressive with lively images, robert... like your unintented sparks of alliteration.. winning's best top you! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 9:03:00 PM

Very creative, Rob. I like the analogy of the tree's "year rings" to the seniors. I'm getting up there so I can relate to this. Great entry for Francine's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn