Aquarius

A jar of water washed
Away my past regrets
Afflictions put to rest 
Ashamed no more am I
And when the clock strikes twelve
Awake, my soul, to greet
Another birth of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lowe Avatar
February 21, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Profound! One. Love the canvassing of this poem. Peace and Love. (02/15/1942)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Cute! Congrats to you!
Miller Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 7:43 AM
Excellent poem flows wonderfully, congratulations
Evangeline Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Thanks! I certainly hope the flow is good enough, it is about water after all :p
mysore Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 12:26 AM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 9:14 PM
This is poignant and sweet. When is your birthday,? Congrats to you
Evangeline Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Thank you. My birthday is actually in August; however, Aquarius is the opposite/complement of my zodiac sign (Leo), and I've always liked water as an element, which is why I picked this theme.
Rolland Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 11:33 AM
so well written and touching moment merry christmas poet
Buhagiar Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 10:05 AM
This was so well done Wish you luck.
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