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Aquarius

A jar of water washed Away my past regrets Afflictions put to rest Ashamed no more am I And when the clock strikes twelve Awake, my soul, to greet Another birth of me

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Date: 2/21/2025 7:34:00 AM
Profound! One. Love the canvassing of this poem. Peace and Love. (02/15/1942)
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Date: 1/2/2025 11:51:00 AM
Cute! Congrats to you!
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Date: 1/2/2025 7:43:00 AM
Excellent poem flows wonderfully, congratulations
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 1/2/2025 6:04:00 PM
Thanks! I certainly hope the flow is good enough, it is about water after all :p
Date: 1/2/2025 12:26:00 AM
Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 1/1/2025 9:14:00 PM
This is poignant and sweet. When is your birthday,? Congrats to you
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 1/2/2025 6:00:00 PM
Thank you. My birthday is actually in August; however, Aquarius is the opposite/complement of my zodiac sign (Leo), and I've always liked water as an element, which is why I picked this theme.
Date: 12/24/2024 11:33:00 AM
so well written and touching moment merry christmas poet
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Date: 12/24/2024 10:05:00 AM
This was so well done Wish you luck.
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