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April Showers

Pitter-patter I hear raindrops fall
Sunshine follows and dries them all

Any Theme Crystalline Contest
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rainskysunweathercrystalline

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Stephen Pennell

November 14, 2016 at 12:45 PM

I see that's how you do it ! love it stephen

Jan Allison

November 14, 2016 at 3:29 PM

Thanks Stephen - don't use mine as a good example lol I think it is too simple - I loved the imagery on yours:-) I am not sure if end rhyme is needed I have seen some with and some without.:-) hugs jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

November 13, 2016 at 6:55 PM

Great poetess, this is so very euphoniously lovely!! It has winner stamped all over it! Best wishes always. Hugs and a 7. Pandita

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 7:01 PM

aww Pandita you are so kind:-) my poem is very simple but I think its quite cute:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

November 13, 2016 at 4:44 PM

Hey Jan, of all the entries to date this one is the only one that I will sing on the next rainy day....thanks....

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 5:05 PM

Thanks John I think it may be too simple for the contest but that's my style and I'm happy with this fun poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

November 13, 2016 at 10:13 AM

Literally and metaphorically beautiful, Jan:)

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 12:08 PM

Thanks Daniel:-) It is a very simple poem but I'm really pleased with the overall result:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

November 13, 2016 at 4:31 AM

Just how it happened down here this morning:) lovely, Jan:)

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:47 AM

Thanks Jo I love to see the sunshine after the rain:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hardison

November 13, 2016 at 2:50 AM

Nicely put. As such no need to be 'all wet'. Lots of Luck in contest. Peace, Love and Joy.

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:48 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

November 13, 2016 at 1:49 AM

Beautiful in it's simplicity, Jan, good luck. Viv x

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:48 AM

It is very simple Viv I doubt it will place but I write and hope:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

November 13, 2016 at 12:07 AM

Beautiful, now just wake me up when spring arrives!!! :)

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:49 AM

We could always hibernate together Arthur lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

November 12, 2016 at 8:43 PM

this is so CUTE, Jan. What a simple but creative idea!!

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:49 AM

I told you it was simple lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

November 12, 2016 at 8:43 PM

Rain is falling where's my hat?//stepped on it, crushed it flat//Where's Cinderella?//(my umbrella)//full of rodent holes, the dirty rat! Hadda go see what this "crystalline" form is all about, methinks you've made a pretty good go at it. huggalunks! ~ j

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 8:49 AM

Thanks for the limerick my friend:-) hugs jan xx