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April Glowers

this endless rain pains like an idle pent up ***** gnawing away at sanity grinding nerves into digestible bits this this is not nourishment

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/7/2017 10:01:00 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed this, but your poem is even better read out loud. By the way, Maureen, I wished for the sun, which finally came, and with it endless lawn work (: Amitiés

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/7/2017 10:27:00 PM

I can see that, as how my face contorts reciting it in my own mind, grinding it out ;) A labour of love your garden is I am sure; my wish is for sun and countless birds. xomo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/6/2017 10:54:00 AM

I am pumping flood water out of my backyard, I can feel this poem!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/6/2017 1:12:00 PM

Oh, that sucks...aw crap sorry ;) xomo

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/5/2017 5:12:00 PM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page. Emile.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/6/2017 1:13:00 PM

Your reviews are literary gems. xomo

Forrest Pasky

Date: 4/5/2017 3:42:00 PM

Funny. :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/6/2017 1:14:00 PM

:) I think so, what kind of dog do you picture when you read this?

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/5/2017 1:04:00 PM

Hello Maureen. You have me laughing and smiling with this expressive and powerful entry. Your words are clear. And yes, enough already with all this dampness that goes right to our bodies and minds. Can I second your thoughts. I found this creatively well stated.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/5/2017 1:19:00 PM

Tee hee, thanks! Bits of sun poking through today but more rain and flood warnings for tomorrow; that said, I'll be doing the rain dance when the draughts hit ;) xomo!

Chris Green

Date: 4/4/2017 4:19:00 PM

They say, April showers bring May flowers" At least that is what I heard. But I do know how rain can really dampen one's mood. Nicely screamed my friend.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/4/2017 4:53:00 PM

That loud a growl huh? ;) thanks darlin xomo!

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 3:18:00 PM

Think about August and how you might wish for rain, that might make it better... good one Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/4/2017 3:43:00 PM

Oh Charlie, you are one of those always looking on the bright side of life aren't you, I must say I am too, but that half empty glass sure makes for good poetry ;) xomo!