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April Glowers

this endless rain
pains
like an idle
pent up *****
gnawing away at sanity
grinding nerves
into digestible bits
this
this is not
nourishment

angstaprildograinfree verse

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

April 7, 2017 at 10:01 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed this, but your poem is even better read out loud. By the way, Maureen, I wished for the sun, which finally came, and with it endless lawn work (: Amitiés

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 7, 2017 at 10:27 PM

I can see that, as how my face contorts reciting it in my own mind, grinding it out ;) A labour of love your garden is I am sure; my wish is for sun and countless birds. xomo!

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2017 at 10:54 AM

I am pumping flood water out of my backyard, I can feel this poem!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 6, 2017 at 1:12 PM

Oh, that sucks...aw crap sorry ;) xomo

Emile Pinet

April 5, 2017 at 5:12 PM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page. Emile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 6, 2017 at 1:13 PM

Your reviews are literary gems. xomo

Forrest Pasky

April 5, 2017 at 3:42 PM

Funny. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 6, 2017 at 1:14 PM

:) I think so, what kind of dog do you picture when you read this?

Lisa Ricci

April 5, 2017 at 1:04 PM

Hello Maureen. You have me laughing and smiling with this expressive and powerful entry. Your words are clear. And yes, enough already with all this dampness that goes right to our bodies and minds. Can I second your thoughts. I found this creatively well stated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 5, 2017 at 1:19 PM

Tee hee, thanks! Bits of sun poking through today but more rain and flood warnings for tomorrow; that said, I'll be doing the rain dance when the draughts hit ;) xomo!

Chris Green

April 4, 2017 at 4:19 PM

They say, April showers bring May flowers" At least that is what I heard. But I do know how rain can really dampen one's mood. Nicely screamed my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 4, 2017 at 4:53 PM

That loud a growl huh? ;) thanks darlin xomo!

Charlie Smith

April 4, 2017 at 3:18 PM

Think about August and how you might wish for rain, that might make it better... good one Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 4, 2017 at 3:43 PM

Oh Charlie, you are one of those always looking on the bright side of life aren't you, I must say I am too, but that half empty glass sure makes for good poetry ;) xomo!

April Glowers

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