April Daydreams

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the april sun tickles my funny bone
i wish i weren't so down and all alone
sitting tacitly on a cold park bench
my aching bruised heart to quench
i gaze up at the lofty sky of blue
and launch daydream bubbles of me and you



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on March 24, 2019 for CONTEST 580 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

Originally posted on December 12, 2018

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/27/2019 1:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thanks, Subimal. Much appreciated.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/27/2019 1:39:00 AM

'daydream bubbles' - exquisite! Congrats Line on your win with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 1:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/13/2018 1:14:00 PM

Like Gershon & Caren, I was captivated by your "daydream bubbles"... ;) I think we all need those to counteract the heartbreaking reality of life sometimes.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2018 10:10:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Most appreciated.