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the april sun tickles my funny bone i wish i weren't so down and all alone sitting tacitly on a cold park bench my aching bruised heart to quench i gaze up at the lofty sky of blue and launch daydream bubbles of me and you AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on March 24, 2019 for CONTEST 580 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Originally posted on December 12, 2018

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Date: 3/27/2019 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Line.
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Date: 3/27/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/27/2019 1:39:00 AM
'daydream bubbles' - exquisite! Congrats Line on your win with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/27/2019 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/13/2018 1:14:00 PM
Like Gershon & Caren, I was captivated by your "daydream bubbles"... ;) I think we all need those to counteract the heartbreaking reality of life sometimes.
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Date: 12/13/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/13/2018 10:51:00 AM
A very cute, sincere and loving write Line, well done. I enjoy your style of poetry. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/13/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/13/2018 1:20:00 AM
"daydream bubbles" - uh-oh. Gershon beat me to it. Anyway, it's what really hit me as terrific.
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. It wasn't a race. LOL
Date: 12/12/2018 10:28:00 PM
"Daydream bubbles" -- sigh! :) gw
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Date: 12/12/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thanks for highlighting this key image, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
I like, nice rhythm and flow
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2018 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy. Most appreciated.

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