David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

approximation of love

      

                    two plus two is five 
                that would be inaccurate 
                      however precise 
             he loves me he loves me not
            goddammit ~ he hits the spot 


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David Kavanagh

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Jennifer Proxenos February 18, 2025 at 8:19 AM You confuse me my friend, for i must admit, i belong to the arts, Maths and I always disagreed. Blessings/hugs - Jennifer. David Kavanagh February 18, 2025 at 11:00 AM Don’t worry about it Jennifer, trying to add up an approximation of love is quite impossible, oh and a little playing about here too, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 16, 2025 at 7:23 AM Multiples! My mind doth live in the gutter. ~x David Kavanagh February 16, 2025 at 8:14 AM You speak my language Super Mo, why settle for anything less ;) cheers David