Approaching Flood

Constant on-pouring Rain coming with viciousness Flood worries are true Russell Sivey

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/9/2011 4:37:00 PM

So appropriate with the awful floods and other disasters in the US. You can almost feel the wind and rain lashing at everything. A storm for the mind

Jack Horne

Date: 9/9/2011 10:07:00 AM

very vivid haiku, my friend

Don Johnson

Date: 9/9/2011 3:57:00 AM

don't stay out in the flood Russell, start dog paddling for the sure...:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2011 11:30:00 PM

today much flooding in Northern part of NJ and more to come ..even in PA.. rivers cresting to outstandting proportions Russell.. your words tell it all luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:13:00 PM

A good one and very relevent to what is happening these days!