Applying Makeup

arctic plain
sullen light circles slowly
applying makeup
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:26 PM
very interesting imagery for it!
Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 11:40 AM
Clever Senryu Deb, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 4:57 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry Deb. It was a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today and I hope you will continue to write. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be in 2011. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:08 PM
That's one thing I don't have to do. However, your senryu describes the procedure well in its few words.
Henderson Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 5:20 PM
soup mail
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January 17, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Gee, I never thought of it that way, Deb. What a creative view! Awesome senryu. Love, Carolyn
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