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May God hear my prayer That I achieve my goals today I buff up my chest In hope you find me the juiciest And swallow me whole My seeds will flourish For I am about to commit suicide In the name of God I look forward to my heaven As a grown up apple tree

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Date: 5/26/2022 11:04:00 AM
Life after death. Gives health when it lives, grows into trees after death!! A great insightful poem!!
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Date: 10/13/2020 3:39:00 PM
Unlike us humans, an apple is limited for what it can achieve in life, but it certainly makes the most them. Yours is a lovely personification, Tahira. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/20/2020 3:23:00 PM
That’s quite a bite of apple! I don’t know about suicidal seeds but when we bury a seed it grows strong. Blessings
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Date: 6/19/2020 7:55:00 PM
That's a unique way of planting a seed...A very creative piece
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