APPLES

apples
reddish yellow
falling tumbling rolling
freshly baking tasty sweetest
lovely

fruitfunsweettreeupliftingcinquain

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Rachel Treacher

March 31, 2026 at 9:30 AM

This has an autumnal warmth running through it. Love it.

Paula Goldsmith

March 31, 2026 at 9:43 AM

Thank You, for stopping over to read about my "APPLES." Glad you love my fun write. It was fun to bring this one to life. Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 9, 2025 at 1:56 AM

Many congratulations!!!

Paula Goldsmith

March 31, 2026 at 9:39 AM

I am so sorry I missed seeing this from you. Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Also thanks for your, Many congratulations. I love Fall time and apples. Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Charles Messina

October 4, 2025 at 3:17 PM

A tasty cinquain, dear Paula. Very nicely done...best wishes in the contest! have a nice weekend!

Paula Goldsmith

October 5, 2025 at 11:07 AM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Also thanks for your, best wishes in the contest. I love Fall time and apples. Apples baked or in a pie with cinnamon are very tasty. Ummm!!! I did buy some fresh apples this week. Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Jay Narain

October 3, 2025 at 11:19 AM

Makes me hungry for the yummy apple pie. Nice work.

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:45 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. Warm apple pie with cinnamon and ice cream on top would be heavenly. Ummm!!! But none here and that makes me sad.... I am not baking yet. Tooooooo early. I did buy some fresh apples this week. Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Joseph P. DiMino

October 3, 2025 at 4:27 AM

My favorite. Apple pie, the more topping the better. Apple this apple that! Unlimited possibilities. Sometimes think I would even wear an apple hat. Though I can't image what that would look like. Love it!

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:42 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. Yes, apples in baking or pie with cinnamon with ice cream on top are heavenly. Ummm!!! I am not baking yet. Tooooooo early. I did buy some fresh apples this week. Apple hat??? You need to make one and write about it... Hahaha!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 3, 2025 at 1:37 AM

- Sounds good ... save some for me, Paula - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:39 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Fall and apples go together. Yes, apples in baking or pie with cinnamon are heavenly. Ummm!!! I am not baking yet. Tooooooo early. I did buy some fresh apples this week. Hugs... Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

CayCay Godwin

October 2, 2025 at 9:43 PM

Oh, I'm wanting apple pie. I smell it, and cinnamon, too. What have you done to me? A delicious Cinquain!

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:24 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. Oh yes, apples baking or a pie both with cinnamon are so delicious. Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Andrea Dietrich

October 2, 2025 at 8:54 PM

Oh you did the modern way. Very nice

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:21 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Glad you found this to be, Very nice. It was fun to write. Fall and apples go together. Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

David Crandall

October 2, 2025 at 7:43 PM

mmm, love apples in baking...thanks for bringing them to mind!

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:16 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. Oh yes, apples in baking with cinnamon are heavenly. Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Sara Kendrick

October 2, 2025 at 4:46 PM

Aren't baked apples good and even better with a scoop of ice cream Thanks for sharing the poem even though you can't share the apples. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:13 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. Oh yes, baked apples or warm pie with ice cream on top is heavenly. Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

sara Etgen-Baker

October 2, 2025 at 4:44 PM

now I'm craving an apple....love them cold and crisp or in apple pie...yum. Nicely done, Paula. hugs and blessings, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:11 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Glad you found this to be, Nicely done. It was fun to write. Fall and apples go together. How about some warm pie with ice cream on top??? Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

William Kelii Kekaula

October 2, 2025 at 4:08 PM

Beautiful caesura-like, somewhat, as beauty goes on. Aloha, my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:08 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. I love both.... Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Paige Hind

October 2, 2025 at 3:10 PM

Yes, they are! :)

Paula Goldsmith

October 3, 2025 at 1:07 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. I love Fall time and apples. Fresh apples, baked or in a pie maybe with some ice cream on top. Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Kim Rodrigues

October 2, 2025 at 2:18 PM

Nice combo!

Paula Goldsmith

October 2, 2025 at 2:47 PM

Thank You, for stopping over to read my "APPLES" write. Fall and apples go together. I love fresh apples, baked or in a pie. Ummm!!! Enjoy an APPLE as you write away.................

Paula Goldsmith

October 2, 2025 at 1:30 PM

APPLES ~ Date Written:10/2/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet........ ~~~ Scents of Autumn Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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