Apples

Apples are delicious
and crunchy too.
When you drop it
on the ground
It rolls around
and then it gets
all bruised
It makes me happy
when they are 
so shiny and brand
new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 4:39 PM
a good start. jhl
Poe Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 6:56 PM
OOO great description of apples. Sweet poem! -Alley
K Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 5:43 PM
Made me smile.....great write -Jessica
Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 5:20 PM
Very good Shianna, apples are indeed delicious, another lovely poem, James
Guzzi Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 2:36 PM
Know bright one see for fun if you can make he verse in the shape of an apple! I bet you can!! I know you can! Light & Love & welcome to the soup
Egloff-Metzgar Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Shi-I think you did a wonderful job on your first writings. This one is my favorite. Great job & keep writing! I love you. You make mommy proud! Love Always, Mom
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