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Apple Savory

In a weather so tender
I gandered and wandered in splendor

Lillies and jasmines wafted with the breeze,
When I came across lush, verdant apple trees

They hung there, scarlet with summer sunlight ahead
I slowly approached, spun in elation's thread

It was purity I smelled, a blessing, a bliss
The breeze swayed, bringing with it a -HISS-

I reached for one, the reddest of all
With a -PLUCK- it detached in hand to fall

-PSSHT!- I laid it in water to wash off the dust
It dripped and dripped filling me only with more lust,

On the sidewalk I sat, picking the rightest spot,
Alhamdulilah I whispered, grasped in camelot

Like a starving beggar, in ecstacy I devoured
Its sweetness, tingling juice grasped my tongue with power

Alhamdulilah: Arabic word for Thank God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:19 PM
yum, you make that apple sound so delicious. I am glad I came back in your list and found this spring like poem!
Spence Sr Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 10:10 PM
This is excellent. One must always give thanks. I like your use of figurative language. Great job! ~Joseph
Khufash Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 3:43 PM
great job farah keep it up
Foulk Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 8:04 PM
a beautiful write, well penned. enjoyed reading it.
Winter Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 4:59 PM
Wow Farah. You made an apple seem like the most rare and delicious creation of food ever. My mouth started watering as you took that first bite and I imagined your eyes rolling back in your head in sheer bliss. Such vivid imagery. Awesome write! I swear I am craving an apple! Love, Shar
Lokken Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 9:33 AM
I love fruit---and apples too! I am always eating some kind of fruit. We had a bag of apples here and I ate them all in less than a week. I know your words. So clever and creative! You made getting an apple sound like an enchanting journey or something...talented, dear.:) Regards, Sara
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