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Apple Pie

My jeans are tight I don't know why It must of been that apple pie I couldn't resist it piping hot With lots of custard draped on top. That soft lush pastry just makes me go yum As my mouth competes with my tum I feel so bloated and fit to drop When I tuck in, I must remember to stop. I know I ate a little too much But an apple pie wasn't meant just to touch So get stuck in and start to eat You know you deserve a little treat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/13/2009 7:17:00 PM
I love fried apple pies and it makes me want one soooooo bad...Have enjoyed reading all of your work Leon...God bless...Marty
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Date: 7/24/2009 8:05:00 AM
This is what i expected it to be, very good and i will have a nandoos today as we speak for my little treat.
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:09:00 AM
yum, Apple pie, good rhyme, good work,
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Date: 7/6/2009 8:31:00 AM
Ummmm.... can I have just a little bite...pleeeeeze???
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:10:00 AM
mmmmm yummy, we on our way LOL, just kidding, its even nicer with blackberries in, mmmmmmmmm or apple and blackbery crumble and ice cream , ohhh sweet, A great poem food for thought, God bless you and sue from diane
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Date: 7/5/2009 4:09:00 PM
My sentiments. Sara
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Date: 7/5/2009 3:11:00 PM
Yum... such a tastey treat... Sweet write!
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Date: 7/5/2009 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful piece.....yum- jeremia
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Date: 7/5/2009 3:01:00 PM
Now my stomach is growling, Leon. Quite a tantalizing description and now I'm compelled to check out the brownies I made last night. Much "food" for though here (lol). Love, Carolyn
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