Apple Pickin' Time

It is apple pickin' time in Georgia
Come get them while they're crisp and not quite ripe 
Bite into apple's delicious tartness
From the tree's garden of Eden a few swipe

Down where the apple blossoms in springtime
Many hearts flourish fulfilling life's fate
And red grapes produce a fine wine sometimes
The apple-grape wine gets sweet with a wait

Come gather in the harvest~apples golden
Clip some stems of the grape chosen
Mix the two in baskets enjoy their delight
Harvest two fruits with their sweet juice swollen

It is apple pickin' time in Georgia
Come get them while they're crisp and not quite ripe
Bite into apple's delicious tartness
From the tree's garden of Eden a few swipe

This short poem like fine apple-grape wine
Will  become better if allowed to age
Then drink a swig while on roast chicken dine
If I did this one right, well just you gauge 

Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
Contest: Apple Pickin' Time
Written: October 18, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/13/2013 4:14:00 PM
I love the richness of the descriptions in this poem. Very nicely written, Sara! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! :)
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:27:00 PM
Sara, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE
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Date: 11/9/2013 12:04:00 PM
I enjoyed being in the scene with great aromas and tastes. Well done. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:29:00 AM
A great poem, Sara. Should have been rated higher . Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/9/2013 4:07:00 AM
Congrats on the win , sara
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:56:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win. I just recently went with my sister to pick apples. They were delicious. Literally, golden delicious.
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Date: 10/22/2013 5:07:00 AM
- I "Drink" it with pleasure, your beautiful poem Sara. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 3:31:00 PM
I like how you put in the part about Georgia. A nice song like poem you did for the contest. check stanza four for a few typos. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/20/2013 11:02:00 AM
Your poem alluring me to enjoy the cocktail drink of wine mixing both of apples and grapes. Beautiful poem enjoyed. Lovely done. Good luck, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:37:00 AM
simply breathtaking in mood and tone, sara... love them crunchy apples, anytime... your word choices make this moment really refreshing, wow!.:) huggs
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Date: 10/19/2013 7:11:00 PM
Thanksgiving is going to be here soon! It falls on the same day as Chanukah this year - first time I remember that happening. Nice poem here! Take a look at an urban poem I just published.
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:07:00 AM
A fascinating write you've penned here my dear friend Sara. Thank you so much for the joy of reading it and the rich vicarious experience it gave. How I wish, i'll experience apple picking someday 'cuz we don't have here. ;))) A sure winning piece for me. Thank you so much for sharing. Have a great wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:16:00 AM
Hi Sara, Lovely write as nice as apple pie.. Ken
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:37:00 PM
Very rich and vivid descriptions in this poem. This was a unique take on the apple theme. You did a great job with your rhymes. Nicely done, Sara. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the nice comments. I truly appreciate it!
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:11:00 PM
loved the vision excellent piece
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:48:00 PM
This is a fantastic and ingenious of a write my friend! I thoroughly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a glorious piece, such a supreme poem, Great Work!!
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