Probir Gupta Poet Tanka

Apple Flowers

Bearing the smell of
Lost light pink apple flowers
Rain falls on my cheek
What delight it brings don't know
Let me unlock my tear drops
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August 6, 2016

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Agnes Krampe August 8, 2016 at 8:27 AM So glad to have found your poetry. I love how your sparse description evokes such emotion. Agnes Probir Gupta August 8, 2016 at 10:07 AM Well, small for me is beautiful ... Thanks ...

Demetrios Trifiatis August 7, 2016 at 1:43 AM Impressively beautiful dear, Probir. I felt the dops of rain! A seven! Probir Gupta August 7, 2016 at 4:49 AM Thank you ...

Joseph P. DiMino August 6, 2016 at 10:13 AM Beautiful writing! Memories of joy, memories of pain--at the least, with the apple blossom from the shattering tear, the memory of courage--having tried love to the breaking. Probir Gupta August 6, 2016 at 10:20 AM Thank you ... Glad that you have come across many a colour ...