Apple Blossoms

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This is a 12 Verse Solo Renga; it is in the Junicho form:


Apple Blossoms


Cool in the morning
A few leaves are still clinging
To a few branches

Is it Monday or Tuesday?
Days of retirement blend

Dry snowflakes falling,
Like white dust on the dry ground,
Scatter in the wind

As a stranger's car drives by
Exceeding the speed limit

While clucking her tongue
She disapproves of the way
Children act today

Opinions fill cyberspace
There's no time for calm or grace

A few grains of sand
Shifting at the river's edge
Ripple the surface

Sharp rays of intense sunlight
Sweat descends into the eyes

As she adds water
To her small garden fountain
In her small front yard

The shadow of her lover
Approaching with the full moon

Briefly the wind holds
The scent of apple blossoms,
The sound of an owl

"I knew you'd be here tonight."
Wave upon wave of silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sheart Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Wow! A outstanding poem written straight from your heart and soul. Truly enjoyed! Within your words your full spirit shines like a star. Wonderfull images. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Paticia
Moreno Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Wow, nice structure Jim excellent work...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Ive never heard of this style but, boy, do i love this piece. I'm putting this in my favs..its just beautiful. BG
Richards Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 7:45 AM
What a wonderful voice of expression!! Loved this! ....I think one of your best! ;)
Shango Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 6:28 AM
Jim, you have made me a devotee with this one, it is quite awesome, my friend. What an experiment in imageries too. Love and peace
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