Appealing

Too long she'd delayed --
Since he was deathly afraid
Her last card she played:
Please, please Lord, Help him to see
I'm his if he'd just ask me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:12 AM
Why doesn't she ask him? The dark ages are over. Do you have her number?
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Hi Gershon , If he only knew what she was thinking... Well done. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:26 PM
This is based on a true story, and she never knew. Pity, it isn't. Thanks, Alexis.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 6:34 PM
A last minute Hail Mary so to say...
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:26 PM
And yet, still un-Mary-ied... :)
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