Apparition Ii

APPARITION II saharas at noon at twilight comes a wheezing night cannot forget

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2011 3:44:00 PM

Love this atmospheric piece, my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:48:00 PM

I MEANT CAN'T

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:47:00 PM

Daver,,, always a pleasure to stop your poems,,, I'm a bad poet, and i can stay on top of my game... but, I'm making time right now for you not to forget the little people like me.. who treasure you.. Like the night,,, don't forget me... hehheheh! .. Enjoyed your Haiku~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..P.D.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/11/2011 7:47:00 PM

I stand by my comments on your Haiku's; great writes dear poet ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/11/2011 12:41:00 PM

Perhaps they landed at the wrong oasis, Daver. Scientists studying the pyramids' erosion say much of it was caused by water, not rain. Maybe the desert was once a flood zone. In any case, I enjoyed thinking of a bit of moisture coming to the Sahara at night. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:49:00 PM

I really like your haiku, Daver! thanks so much for your comments to me today!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2011 3:17:00 PM

Interesting one..Enjoyed..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2011 3:17:00 PM

The Sahara at noon would probably really hot and dry...Sara