Apology

Your apology
Changed me
Opened me up
Helped me to feel
Understand the gift of you
By illuminating my understanding
Of who you are
The we-ness of us

You broke down
The walls I had erected
To protect myself
There was no need to fortify 
Or keep you at my fringes
For your love
Is my completeness

Yesterday's sorrows
Invaded my heart
Caused me to restrict my voice
Holding back
I made the wrong choice
Denied what was important to me
Kept my heart at bay
Yet you opened me in a different way
As I listened to what you had to say

Your mind explored
Deep within me
beyond my words
It was my soul cry you heard
Bringing on a wave of tears
You listened
With more than just ears
Unpacking a treasure 
Dissolving shadowed fears
Revelatory images
From my broken mirror
I was comforted
By you being near

In the end
An apology
Was your greatest gift for me
It showed me a different way to be
I rose up from the muck
To a place where I could see
Where I touched and was thankful
For the you in we
Who helped me finally be
Emptied of those things I held back
The long lost 
restricted 
parts of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/10/2014 1:58:00 PM
Apologies and forgiveness go hand in hand. It is not always easy to own up to our faults...in our hearts yes, but the spoken words take longer to form. #7 Very well expressed thoughts. // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 2:00:00 PM
Thanks once again Paul for a thoughtful reflective response.
Date: 12/7/2014 9:46:00 AM
Wow Richard my heart commands me to tell you I love who you are. As men we are always afraid to show our vulnerabilities. You work hard at having the strenght to expose your sensitive side. God Bless! I have to fav this as a reminder.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 2:01:00 PM
What an extrodinary comment Maurice. You have touched me.
Date: 12/6/2014 7:47:00 AM
Very moving poem. I'm sorry are two powerful words that can sometimes change everything.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 2:01:00 PM
You speak the truth Monterey.
Date: 12/4/2014 6:49:00 AM
The compliment__finding the perfect match..Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:20:00 AM
My pleasure Sarah.
Date: 12/3/2014 6:08:00 PM
Powerful piece on a powerful theme. The impact that sincere remorse has is almost limitless. And yet, so rarely given. Great work...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2014 7:22:00 AM
So true David. Thanks for visiting and commenting.
Date: 12/3/2014 12:13:00 AM
I too apologize, for being perfect, I am truly sorry! LOL kidding, Seriously saying sorry, well when sincere goes a long way, having read a few poems tonight on this topic, very touched with the humanity. This poem flows so well in expressing the sentiment! Great write! A7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:47:00 AM
Once again you amuse me Arthur. Thanks for the levity in my morning.
Date: 12/2/2014 10:19:00 PM
Very wise words Richard! Few words of apology can really work wonders my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:48:00 AM
So true Upma.
Date: 12/2/2014 7:05:00 PM
Richard, you are great, your words real and wise. Well said. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:48:00 AM
Hugs Casarah.
Date: 12/2/2014 10:50:00 AM
It's amazing what a simple apology can do for the giver and the recipients. Beautifully penned Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:49:00 AM
You are kind Brenda.
Date: 12/2/2014 8:47:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Richard! Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for me! Ha poe a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Brenda.
Date: 12/2/2014 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful, Richard. I've also written about forgiveness. When someone has hurt someone else...without an apology, closure can never take place. This is a powerful testament to that. Glad things are ok. Thanks for your post on my Dreamland poem. I'm also so happy that you're in my life.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:53:00 AM
Ditto! I tried responding to your comment yesterday but the site was doing weird things. It seems to be working now. My mom also caught my mistake. Thanks for keeping an eye out for me, it is appreciated. Hugs Richard.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/2/2014 8:44:00 AM
Check your sixth line...illuminating! Only because...I care about your work! Hugs
Date: 12/2/2014 8:35:00 AM
May they never i meant below..Oops Sorry
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Date: 12/2/2014 8:33:00 AM
How beautiful the feeling to forgive or being forgiven.Both carry that same amazing feeling of serenity inside.How wonderful.this poem is..May there will nwver be two of you but always one at heart.Lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2014 8:54:00 AM
You are always so encouraging, thanks Charmaine.
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