Barbara Gorelick Poet Ghazal

Apologies To My Mother

I didn’t appreciate you enough;  I'm sorry, I didn’t know 
Difficult  times, raising us was so tough; I’m sorry I didn’t know
Little money, food in limited supply, yet you never complained
I didn’t notice  your hands were so rough; I’m sorry, I didn’t know
While working two jobs as well as keeping us all safe, fed and happy
You always seemed calm , never  harsh rebuffs; I’m sorry, I didn’t know
I don’t think you ever had  more than one dress or a new winter coat
We had more love than material stuff; I’m sorry I didn’t know
Jeanie now a mom herself and understands what it must have been like
When I speak of mother my voice gets gruff; I’m sorry, I didn’t know….

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Pashang Salehi August 4, 2016 at 5:37 PM Very nice Barbara, very nice ghazal.. inspiring...

Vladislav Raven March 29, 2016 at 5:28 PM Hi Barbara, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Jan Allison March 27, 2016 at 2:12 PM many congrats on your win Barbara:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2016 at 9:37 AM Barbara, congrats on the win. PD

James Inman March 27, 2016 at 8:48 AM Barbara, a beautiful. Isn't it amazing how when we are young we know so strongly how our parents never understand but as we grow older we realize how little we understood.

Brian Davey March 27, 2016 at 2:04 AM Very well done congrats on your placement!

Timothy Hicks March 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM Congrats on your win, Barbara! Mothers do so much, and I guess you only truly realize it when you become a parent yourself. Wonderful ode to your mother, that is universally applicable.

Richard Lamoureux March 16, 2016 at 10:20 AM You knew the important stuff, you knew you were loved. I'm sure more dresses and coats would ever change that fact. She sounds like a terrific mom.

Paul Callus March 15, 2016 at 11:35 AM A lovely and heartfelt poem, Barbara....but now you know and appreciate, and that's what makes it emotionally powerful. ~ Regards // paul

Abdul Malik Mandani March 13, 2016 at 6:21 PM Very nice and heart-rending. Good luck.