Apologetic Eyes

I awoke all alone; she snuck out late last night, and my fragile heart is breaking. She'd silently slipped out, without debate; and as my world shook, I was left quaking. Her lingering scent was still in the air; making me instantly regret our fight. For ebony shadows merge with despair when there is no light; for shadows need light. She left a note, written with words of Hope, a reminder of the good times we've shared. And as I read it, her words wove a rope that pulled at my heartstrings, saying she cared. I nervously rushed to her, head hung low, and begged her not to throw our love away. And asked her why she felt she had to go, what could I say to convince her to stay? As my apologetic eyes leaked tears, I sought forgiveness with my heart and soul. And she gently kissed me, calming my fears; my heart had shattered; that kiss made it whole.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 8:36 PM
“saying our love's not over, only paused. And as apologetic eyes leaked tears,” I love the feelings these two lines gender Emile. My dear husband always put me first as I did him. That is what keeps a couple together for many years. I loved this poem Emile. Congratulations on your deserving first place win. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Thanks, Connie, your comments are always most welcomed and appreciated, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:08 PM
"leaked tears" - Leaking... Wow! Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Gibson Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Very lovely; beautiful alliteration. Thank you for the placement and kind comments.
Pinet Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Thanks, Faye, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
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