Apollo

Sun drenched waves lapping
Beams dancing along the shore
Spreading rays of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/5/2010 11:44:00 AM
What a wonderful take on the photo :) congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:16:00 AM
Brilliance of display in this worthy entry Mitch. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/29/2010 7:30:00 PM
Congrats for the win nicely penned
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:44:00 PM
What a wonderful title to this poem!! I love your take on this contest, Mitch...and glad to see it among the winning poems. I thank you too for all of your comments...you are always so kind. Thank you and congratulations! Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:12:00 PM
Mitch, I wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:37:00 AM
Mitch, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:38:00 AM
Mitch, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > wonderful Haiku >> James
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Date: 3/28/2010 7:02:00 AM
Another big congrats Mitch on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest with this terrific Haiku full of imagery and intensity.. enjoy another trip to the winners circle... see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Mitch. Love Carol
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:05:00 AM
Mitch, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 3/26/2010 11:29:00 AM
An awesme entry Haiku Mitch, if that is what it's for "Good Luck" Thanks for comment, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/26/2010 8:11:00 AM
yes the sun is it any wonder it inspired worship! Light & Love
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Date: 3/26/2010 7:52:00 AM
Thanks. For the haiku
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:03:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an uplifting poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks for your congrats. Keep on writing!!!!! Karen
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:58:00 PM
You paint a picture, to be sure. Hey, If you've got any favorites in the mnusic world, pass them on. Maybe I'll do one for you. How's that? I saw the Presido a few years ago when I was in San Francisco. It's a great town to visit, there is so much to see and that is just one site. My best to you AND your dad. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:47:00 AM
great haiku! just beautifully written!
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:50:00 AM
very nice haiku loved it faleshia
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:24:00 AM
If for Raul contest wish you luck in this well written Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:23:00 AM
Ill bet this is for the new contest..if so..its a winner. Im going to have to start over...BG
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:58:00 AM
nicely written, rays of life is my fav.
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:50:00 AM
Very interesting. Waves, made wetter by the sun drenching them, I like that
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:15:00 AM
Conveyed very nicely indeed Mitch - Thanks for sharing -:)
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