Apollo

Sun drenched waves lapping
Beams dancing along the shore
Spreading rays of life

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 5, 2010 at 11:44 AM

What a wonderful take on the photo :) congrats on your win :)

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:16 AM

Brilliance of display in this worthy entry Mitch. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 29, 2010 at 7:30 PM

Congrats for the win nicely penned

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2010 at 5:44 PM

What a wonderful title to this poem!! I love your take on this contest, Mitch...and glad to see it among the winning poems. I thank you too for all of your comments...you are always so kind. Thank you and congratulations! Carrie

March 28, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Mitch, I wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Audrey Haick

March 28, 2010 at 11:37 AM

Mitch, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Marty Owens

March 28, 2010 at 10:37 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

March 28, 2010 at 8:38 AM

Mitch, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > wonderful Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2010 at 7:02 AM

Another big congrats Mitch on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest with this terrific Haiku full of imagery and intensity.. enjoy another trip to the winners circle... see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Mitch. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

March 28, 2010 at 1:05 AM

Mitch, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

John Freeman

March 26, 2010 at 11:29 AM

An awesme entry Haiku Mitch, if that is what it's for "Good Luck" Thanks for comment, Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

March 26, 2010 at 8:11 AM

yes the sun is it any wonder it inspired worship! Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

March 26, 2010 at 7:52 AM

Thanks. For the haiku

March 25, 2010 at 1:03 PM

Good use of imagery for an uplifting poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks for your congrats. Keep on writing!!!!! Karen

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 25, 2010 at 12:58 PM

You paint a picture, to be sure. Hey, If you've got any favorites in the mnusic world, pass them on. Maybe I'll do one for you. How's that? I saw the Presido a few years ago when I was in San Francisco. It's a great town to visit, there is so much to see and that is just one site. My best to you AND your dad. Regards, Gerard