Apollo

Sun drenched waves lapping Beams dancing along the shore Spreading rays of life

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/5/2010 11:44:00 AM

What a wonderful take on the photo :) congrats on your win :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:16:00 AM

Brilliance of display in this worthy entry Mitch. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 7:30:00 PM

Congrats for the win nicely penned

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2010 5:44:00 PM

What a wonderful title to this poem!! I love your take on this contest, Mitch...and glad to see it among the winning poems. I thank you too for all of your comments...you are always so kind. Thank you and congratulations! Carrie

Date: 3/28/2010 1:12:00 PM

Mitch, I wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:37:00 AM

Mitch, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:38:00 AM

Mitch, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > wonderful Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:02:00 AM

Another big congrats Mitch on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest with this terrific Haiku full of imagery and intensity.. enjoy another trip to the winners circle... see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Mitch. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 1:05:00 AM

Mitch, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

John Freeman

Date: 3/26/2010 11:29:00 AM

An awesme entry Haiku Mitch, if that is what it's for "Good Luck" Thanks for comment, Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/26/2010 8:11:00 AM

yes the sun is it any wonder it inspired worship! Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2010 7:52:00 AM

Thanks. For the haiku

Date: 3/25/2010 1:03:00 PM

Good use of imagery for an uplifting poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks for your congrats. Keep on writing!!!!! Karen

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/25/2010 12:58:00 PM

You paint a picture, to be sure. Hey, If you've got any favorites in the mnusic world, pass them on. Maybe I'll do one for you. How's that? I saw the Presido a few years ago when I was in San Francisco. It's a great town to visit, there is so much to see and that is just one site. My best to you AND your dad. Regards, Gerard

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 3/25/2010 8:47:00 AM

great haiku! just beautifully written!

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/25/2010 7:50:00 AM

very nice haiku loved it faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2010 7:24:00 AM

If for Raul contest wish you luck in this well written Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/25/2010 7:23:00 AM

Ill bet this is for the new contest..if so..its a winner. Im going to have to start over...BG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 5:58:00 AM

nicely written, rays of life is my fav.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/25/2010 5:50:00 AM

Very interesting. Waves, made wetter by the sun drenching them, I like that

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/25/2010 5:15:00 AM

Conveyed very nicely indeed Mitch - Thanks for sharing -:)