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APOLLO 11 BRIGHTENS OUR FUTURE Beyond the twinkling stars, so still - the dark. We strive for greater things - the Moon and Mars. And Venus we do praise her beauty mark. Our Milky Way - homogenized gold stars. Forgotten Pluto, runt, invisible. And mando Jupiter, so powerful. Each planet thrives alone, divisible. Our great universe quite so beautiful. Astronaut stands heroic with flag plant. We stare up at the shining white rapt moon. We dream to see a microscopic ant or life-size man, on the right side of June. The mysterious sky lights up each face. The night unveils our future life in space. 9th Place 5/9/2017 Sonnet Form Shadow Hamilton's Night Sky Sonnets contest

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/19/2017 3:15:00 PM

Kim, a lovely tribute to our landing on the Moon and for the future that our endless, mysterious universe has in store for us. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/19/2017 11:50:00 AM

Kim, enjoyed reading :) congratulations on your win! ~*

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 5/19/2017 10:45:00 AM

Nice going with the sonnet form. a 7 and congrats.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, Janis!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/12/2017 7:33:00 AM

i've seen so many good entries for this contest - and this is one of them! i don't envy her task with the judging! lol...had a quick peek at a couple of your other poems too - you are a skilled, versatile writer; i like your work a lot

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2017 7:59:00 AM

Thanks so much, Charlotte! I appreciate that so much! <3

Darren White

Date: 5/10/2017 4:06:00 AM

I do not remember this of course, but I have heard stories about it. Wonderful poem, Kim, good luck in the contest :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2017 6:38:00 AM

I was very impressed when I visited the Kennedy Space Center last week. I loved seeing the shuttle Atlantis! Thank you, Darren!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2017 4:49:00 PM

I love your entry Kim. Especially your ending in how our future life will be in space. Technology is moving at such a fast pace that our children could be living on another planet. Wonderful! 7 ; )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! Went to Kennedy Space Center last week. Was so impressed!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2017 1:09:00 PM

kim, what a superb portrayal of our galaxy... makes me want to travel to these planets!.. huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2017 3:29:00 PM

Thanks so much, Nette! xx

Chris Green

Date: 5/9/2017 7:14:00 AM

Wonderfully written Kim. I remember sitting in front of the television when we landed on the moon. I wonder if I will get to se us set foot on Mars.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2017 3:30:00 PM

That would be so cool to see a Mars landing!

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 5/9/2017 2:55:00 AM

Kim..A well written piece..with a well delivered touch of excellence.. :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2017 6:35:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lewis!

White Wolf

Date: 5/9/2017 12:31:00 AM

You have done well to squeeze in so many words, Kim! Hopefully, this one shall go Up Up and away to the top! Best of luck

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2017 6:36:00 AM

Thanks so much WW!