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Apocalyptic Fury

Lest the moon tip over and spill the blood, With apocalyptic fury signaling the climax In history as in the days of old Noah’s flood, When the earth resettles like paraffin wax, Forming new boundaries in the land and sea With apocalyptic fury signaling the climax, People of every nation will hopelessly flee Before the great and terrible day of the Lord Forming new boundaries in the land and sea. Rising from below comes the thundering horde Incredibly horrific creatures before unknown Before the great and terrible day of the Lord. Humanity never again occupying the throne Nor understanding the myriads roaming about, Incredibly horrific creatures before unknown. Comes the archangel with a triumphal shout, Lest the moon tip over and spill the blood, Nor understanding the myriads roaming about In history as in the days of old Noah’s flood. Written October 19, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/21/2022 2:01:00 AM

This Terzanelle came straight out of the Old Testament scaring the pants off me!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 8:56:00 AM

Ah, Caren, don't ever be afraid. Keep in mind that "He's got the whole world in His hands." You and me, too.

Terry Flood

Date: 10/20/2022 8:21:00 AM

Cant comment, Milt. I’m too busy putting my head between my knees to kiss my ass goodbye. ;-) Can’t help but wonder which of the beasts would adopt Man’s crown were your poem to prove prophetic. Thought provoking write. Much enjoyed. Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/20/2022 11:00:00 AM

Thank you, Terry. I really appreciated your thoughts on this poem.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/19/2022 5:41:00 PM

Your words speak much truth Milton. We are on the very edge of his return my friend. I just finished a book that was incredibly insightful. He gives evidence of a time frame through biblical information and gives his version of biblical proof. No man knows the exact date and time but the bible references the times and according to him in his 400 page book thinks that it will be around the year 2008. It is an incredible book to read. I lent it out to a Seven Day Adventist that owns a hardware..

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 7:45:00 PM

I'm not much into eschatology, Michael, although I had to study it in seminary. I have my own theories about the Revelation to St. John. Because of the diversity of religious beliefs on Poetry Soup, I try to avoid those discussions. This poem is primarily a collection of images that have apocalyptic concerns. It wasn't meant to be anywhere near definitive or creedal. Thanks for your thoughts.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2022 5:43:00 PM

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Jenna Logan

Date: 10/19/2022 4:53:00 PM

What dark images your lines called to mind. I believe the archangel will lead the way to victory over Satan’s legion, and that no human will sit on the throne. I was impressed with the depth of insight in your thoughts, Milt.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jenna. Be sure to read my response to Michael. I'll refer you there rather than to repeat myself.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/19/2022 12:45:00 PM

Pretty vivid there! Very interesting write a little outside the normal lines for you, eh? I like it!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 12:52:00 PM

Indeed, it is, Jeff. I have no idea what prompted it or where it came from. I just had these images and wrote them as I saw them. Not trying to be St. John here. Thanks.