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God, earn a place in our hearts As we feeble being Sighting us, we strive for grafts Save our day of rising Love each day, is his way Share thoughts, set time to pray. Try to grasp facts each day save us from spates god, earn a place.
Written: February 04, 2022

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Date: 2/5/2022 8:09:00 AM
This is very nice. I will save as a FAVE. Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 2/5/2022 4:34:00 AM
Soothing feels the solemn voice of your poem. A divine message.
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:22:00 PM
We are such feeble creatures. Only with God's caring love, we can survive ! A beautiful and heartfelt prayer to God
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:03:00 PM
Feels live a meditative prayer, we are indeed feeble beings but can learn to be wise and forgiving~
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