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Aperture of the Heart

God, earn a place in our hearts
As we feeble being
Sighting us, we strive for grafts
Save our day of rising

Love each day, is his way
Share thoughts, set time to pray.
Try to grasp facts each day

save us from spates
god, earn a place.

Written: February 04, 2022

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Heidi Sands February 5, 2022 at 8:09 AM This is very nice. I will save as a FAVE. Thank you for sharing :)

Vijay Pandit February 5, 2022 at 4:34 AM Soothing feels the solemn voice of your poem. A divine message.

Valsa George February 4, 2022 at 7:22 PM We are such feeble creatures. Only with God's caring love, we can survive ! A beautiful and heartfelt prayer to God

Michelle Faulkner February 4, 2022 at 6:03 PM Feels live a meditative prayer, we are indeed feeble beings but can learn to be wise and forgiving~