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Anywhere If I'M With You

Anywhere if I’m with you She asked me where I’d like to go If money didn’t matter I said I didn’t really know My mind began to scatter Toronto, Athens, maybe France Aruba sounded fine Casablanca, such romance Though Italy has wine London, Dublin, Amsterdam Malta, New York City Acapulco, Nottingham All of them are pretty But then I said my answer true It’s anywhere if I’m with you 2/21/17 Written for the: Where I want to go poetry contest Sponsored by: Nicola Byrne

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Date: 3/20/2017 8:56:00 PM
Bravo Chris, not surprised, congratulations...
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Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie
Date: 3/20/2017 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place with this beautiful poem Chris! Right answer! : )7
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Chris Green
Date: 3/20/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie. I like that...right answer. :)
Date: 2/24/2017 7:33:00 AM
Lovely Chris, good luck in the comp :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary
Date: 2/22/2017 10:09:00 AM
Oh tell me If you she ever decides to get you with her to Malta..I will invite you over ,and show you around.Anywhere sounds ideal..If two are happy together..they won't really mind where they are..Don't they...Very sweet poem... :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend from Malta. I will definitely let you know if your island ends up as the destination. :) I appreciate you and the offer Charmaine, I think it would be a lovely trip.
Date: 2/22/2017 8:35:00 AM
Hi Chris, I loved this poem it was so romantic. I agree, as long as I'm with the one I love , it is the perfect place. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 2/22/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. You are always far too kind to me and I hope you never stop. :)
Date: 2/22/2017 4:35:00 AM
Reading, I warmed to the sincere virtues offered in each place on your traveling dream list. I then grinned at the romantic ending. I visualized it as a romantic flirt generating tender and mutual warming smiles, followed by a very enjoyable and intimate ... discussion to determine the 'where.' Hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Narrowing that list down won't be easy but it sure will be fun. :) I appreciate your kindness CayCay.
Date: 2/21/2017 10:02:00 PM
That's so sweet :) I KNEW that's how the poem would end and you didn't disappoint me. Good luck in the contest
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:10:00 AM
yeah, it seems a lot of mine end up in the same place. :) Thanks so much my friend
Date: 2/21/2017 9:59:00 PM
Terrific writing. An enchanting piece where destination is anywhere two are together :-) Lovely sentiments, creativity expressed. My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much Lynn. I am thrilled you enjoyed my little poetic vacation. :)
Date: 2/21/2017 7:27:00 PM
Well done Chris, best wishes in the contest...
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 2/21/2017 6:11:00 PM
Sonnet, schmonnet - who would dare get picky with any of your beautiful poems.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
You'd be surprised. :) Thanks so much my friend, I always appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 2/21/2017 5:56:00 PM
nice turn, creative way to do this contest..good luck
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much Frederic.
Date: 2/21/2017 5:42:00 PM
Great one Chris! Good luck in the contest :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 5:45:00 PM
I am happy you liked this one. :) Thank you my sweet friend.
Date: 2/21/2017 5:12:00 PM
I hope you have fun:) Great write for contest. Nicola will love this one.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thanks my friend, my first sonnet, if it is a true sonnet. I'm not too sure about that part. :)

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