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Anyone Game? My head throbbed. It started to boggle my mind. With such pain, I wanted my doctor and quick. I made an appointment and got myself in. Good thing I did. It turns out my brain was sick. An x-ray on my cranium I was shown. The doctor said, “Look there; can you spot it?” I looked and saw a dark blob; the doctor said, “I’m sorry, but be thankful that we caught it!” He told me I would need an operation, that furthermore, I would be in trouble if I waited, for my life was at huge risk if he didn’t operate like on the double! I lay there on the table with aggravation. The doctor did not seem to have a clue. Was I hearing things? As I was going under, he called for spoons, and laughing, said "Guess who!" March 14, 2019 Carol Connell's Anyone Game? Contest

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Date: 3/16/2019 1:04:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Good write on the contest theme. I enjoyed how you incorporated all the various games in this write. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/15/2019 5:14:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:47:00 PM
Ack, Andrea, not spoons, truly a horrific twist on the hospital games, I enjoyed the humor and the unusual theme.
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Date: 3/15/2019 3:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. A smooth write for this challenge.
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:54:00 PM
Great job on your placement! Creative topic and you put it together very nicely!
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Date: 3/15/2019 2:11:00 PM
If the doctor is clueless then going 'under' might be literal!...Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 3/15/2019 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your great win. Great take on the theme.
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Date: 3/14/2019 6:15:00 PM
So well done, but the ending was great. There goes CayCay again, saying what I wanted to say. Thanks CayCay!
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Date: 3/14/2019 9:18:00 AM
I love, love, love the end - it was all very good, leading to a perfect ending. I started mine somewhere on my pad days upon days ago and suspect I best find it to finalize it soon. Great job, entertaining and most-Andrea amazing! Love ... CayCay
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Date: 3/14/2019 8:45:00 AM
you wove the games in so skillfully Andrea, I really enjoyed this challenge too! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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