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'anxious Kiss'

The magnetism was always in our midst we were too anxious to act on it until that day fate took over I can still smell your cologne felt like I was floating you pull me closer encircle me your lips brush against mine
07/04/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2011 7:12:00 PM
okay Wilma--gettin me all worked up here . Great poem. Very romantic and attractive. well done M'Lady! Thank you for your comment. Always appreciated - Your friend, Bob
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:43:00 PM
Wow girlfriend, Im lickin me lips already. You do have a way with words. XXX
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:25:00 AM
oooh very nice, Missy-- even your title is very apt-- I am sure that this would be among the winners! hugs to you :)
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:06:00 AM
wonderful Etheree on kiss-kash
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:07:00 PM
LOVE IT. Nice and slow, building up....
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:47:00 PM
Very warm, very HOT... Very good!!! A sweet heated write my dear Wilma... I love it!! love Michael
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Date: 4/8/2011 9:50:00 AM
The touch, the taste - his hands my waist = mmm - lovely Etheree Wilma. Have a lovely weekend....:)xx
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Date: 4/7/2011 2:25:00 PM
Like the way you describe your reluctance to act on the "magnetism," Wilma. Of course, the scent of cologne can be intoxicating, just as your poem is. This would make a great entry for Frank Herrera's "First Kiss" contest. Hope you've entered it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2011 7:11:00 AM
RAWWWHR, wilma.. i need oxygen after reading this breathtaking work.. what an explosive smack that makes me gooooeey! best winning wishes if for a contest... drooling with hugggs:) nette
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Date: 4/7/2011 6:16:00 AM
OH Wilma so beautiful and so sweet a write .. if for Frank's contest good luck luv.. such lovely expressions for that magical moment of a kiss... fireworks ..wow....enjoyed and still floating too...
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Date: 4/7/2011 5:44:00 AM
Damn, I could use a kiss like this. Excellent job!
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