Wilma Neels Poet Etheree

'anxious Kiss'

The magnetism was always in our midst
we were too anxious to act on it
until that day fate took over
I can still smell your cologne
felt like I was floating
you pull me closer
encircle me
your lips brush
against
mine


07/04/2011

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Robert A. Dufresne April 19, 2011 at 7:12 PM okay Wilma--gettin me all worked up here . Great poem. Very romantic and attractive. well done M'Lady! Thank you for your comment. Always appreciated - Your friend, Bob

Sidney Hall Mad Poet April 10, 2011 at 5:43 PM Wow girlfriend, Im lickin me lips already. You do have a way with words. XXX

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 10:25 AM oooh very nice, Missy-- even your title is very apt-- I am sure that this would be among the winners! hugs to you :)

Kash Poet April 9, 2011 at 4:06 AM wonderful Etheree on kiss-kash

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2011 at 11:07 PM LOVE IT. Nice and slow, building up....

Michael J. Falotico April 8, 2011 at 1:47 PM Very warm, very HOT... Very good!!! A sweet heated write my dear Wilma... I love it!! love Michael

James Fraser April 8, 2011 at 9:50 AM The touch, the taste - his hands my waist = mmm - lovely Etheree Wilma. Have a lovely weekend....:)xx

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2011 at 2:25 PM Like the way you describe your reluctance to act on the "magnetism," Wilma. Of course, the scent of cologne can be intoxicating, just as your poem is. This would make a great entry for Frank Herrera's "First Kiss" contest. Hope you've entered it! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud April 7, 2011 at 7:11 AM RAWWWHR, wilma.. i need oxygen after reading this breathtaking work.. what an explosive smack that makes me gooooeey! best winning wishes if for a contest... drooling with hugggs:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2011 at 6:16 AM OH Wilma so beautiful and so sweet a write .. if for Frank's contest good luck luv.. such lovely expressions for that magical moment of a kiss... fireworks ..wow....enjoyed and still floating too...

Poet Tacito April 7, 2011 at 5:44 AM Damn, I could use a kiss like this. Excellent job!