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Anxiety

i hate this place I'm forced to call home, drowning in all my anxiety wishing i could get away, i try so hard, the more i try, the more it seems to follow me i want to get away so bad, but I'm stuck under a thunder-filled cloud the voices are so negative, they wrap around me saying all the wrong things and start to grow so loud they pick on me, i kick and scream and begin to fight i count on you, you've become my hope, you pull me towards the light you've been they're, you've seen it, with you i remain protected you've pushed them away, took me out, it's sunny now, you've killed them, no chance in being resurrected

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/24/2012 3:44:00 PM
Hi, Chelsy. Thanks for your comment on my poem. I enjoyed seeing your poem here. Are you kind of new to Soup? I like the way this poem is stream of thought style.
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:16:00 PM
Wow Chelsy! You also have a talent :o)I have just read thru about your last 7 poems..I see such a truthfulness in your poetry. Alot of sadness there:o( But you are writing from your heart <3 and thats a good way to help deal with any pain you are feeling.Sorry I didn't comment on all of them. I'll be back to read more. :o) And thank you for stopping by my poetry..I'm happy to know you have enjoyed it. :o) Hopefuly you will read more?..lol.
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:12:00 PM
Dont give up,never give up,love it
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