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An ant was dragging an insect, At least 3 times its size. Though desiccated, still it seemed Like quite a lucky prize. I watched its steady progress - It would heave a bit and stop, Hurry forth without its burden, Double back where it did drop. Other ants passed by, ignoring All the effort being made, On their journeys through the grass As part of some unknown crusade. Just like humans, who don’t notice Someone doing all the work While they play at being busy Since it’s easier to shirk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/9/2020 1:19:00 PM
Reminds me of The Little Red Hen story; maybe this was a non-sharing ant?
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Date: 9/7/2020 2:44:00 PM
I'm sure all those other ants were self-proclaimed "supervisors"! I've had some bosses like that. Great job on your anthropomorphism of the ant populace. Hope you didn't find any in your kitchen!
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Date: 9/7/2020 12:11:00 PM
LOVE your last verse! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:34:00 PM
Another lesson from the mighty ant! Very special observations, ilene! Superb! :) gw
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