Antsy

An ant was dragging an insect, 
At least 3 times its size.
Though desiccated, still it seemed
Like quite a lucky prize.

I watched its steady progress -
It would heave a bit and stop,
Hurry forth without its burden, 
Double back where it did drop.

Other ants passed by, ignoring
All the effort being made,
On their journeys through the grass
As part of some unknown crusade.

Just like humans, who don’t notice
Someone doing all the work 
While they play at being busy
Since it’s easier to shirk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Reminds me of The Little Red Hen story; maybe this was a non-sharing ant?
Watt Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:44 PM
I'm sure all those other ants were self-proclaimed "supervisors"! I've had some bosses like that. Great job on your anthropomorphism of the ant populace. Hope you didn't find any in your kitchen!
Leffanta Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 12:11 PM
LOVE your last verse! Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Another lesson from the mighty ant! Very special observations, ilene! Superb! :) gw
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