Antoine

Antoine is a Vampire Ghoul,

Quite barbaric, bloodthirsty and cruel,

         With a fang in your throat

         He’ll suck slowly and gloat

With a smile as you whimper and mewl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Excellent Limerick Terry. Bravo! I'm having a hard time now finding poems of yours that I haven't read.
Horne Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 9:21 AM
LOL, had a good chuckle here : )
Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 4:31 PM
Scary...Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Lots of real people just like this [nod] Light & Love
Collins Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Dear Terry - love this sadistic treat Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 11:47 PM
hey, I like those rhymes for this neat vampire poem, Terry!! Yum (haha)
Horne Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 12:14 PM
LOL, good one : )
Palmer Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 6:31 AM
no blood for you today Antoine,lol,nice write Terry
Onclaud Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 12:42 AM
like the way you goofed around, terry.. greeaat job!..:) hugggs!
Williams Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 10:16 AM
very funny..David
Whitehead Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Oh goodness!!! I hope I never meet him. ha ha Well written.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:25 AM
..lol...Well written Terry, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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