Graphic by Jon Corelis from public domain images on Wikimedia Commons
No one should ever be treated by anyone like I've been treated by you: you think you're so cool you're exempt from the rule that you pay for whatever you do; but the earth will turn and the sun will burn till the day you finally see that no one should ever treat anyone else the way that you've treated me!
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