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Antique Rose


            And of all the roses there is none more lovely than the antique rose,
nothing compares to the classic old-rose shape, round and with full petals;
      tumbling from a vase or garden trellis, creamy roses soft and pink,
in my mother's vast planting there was always a place for these vintage roses.
          Quite beautiful and romantic for a blushing bride to carry down the aisle,
under my kitchen window they grow in harmony with my other sweet flowers;
      even at my mother's funeral, her casket was draped in antique roses.

           Really they are my favourite flower and I have fond memories of them,
on walks around the garden with mother we would pick a bouquet of colors;
      sweet oyster, pale pink, nude and rose, vintage beauties of perfection,
even the antique rose grows at mother's tomb taken from her own wild garden;
            soft and gorgeous, they are perfection for love and for eternal grief.

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November 4, 2015


Poetry/Acrostic/Antique Rose
Copyright Protected, ID 15-723-640-0
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Acrostic

For the contest, Favorite Flower, 
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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A  Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations Broken, on your sweet win. SKAT
La France Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thanks so much Skat ~
Inman Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 8:44 AM
BW, I have a photo from Bok Tower of a pink 'Louis Philippe' Antique Tea Rose (in Florida known as the Cracker Rose). Like your poem its quiet beautiful.
La France Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:37 PM
James, oh that photo sounds wonderful, thanks so much the visit, and comment ~
Tor Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Heartfelt and beautiful Constance. Congratulations on your win! One of my favorites for the contest!!
Ebbs Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Congrats Broken! :)
La France Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Edward for the congrats ~
Nau Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Congrats! Love the acrostic genre for this! Fun!
La France Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Edlynn, thank you so much for the congrats ~
Romaine Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Hey BW, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful winning poem in the contest! Truly an exquisite flower. Well deserved win! Be Blessed, Neva
La France Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Thanks Neva for the nice comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Thank you so much Jan ~
Negron Flores Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations in your win.
La France Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Thanks for my placement Nayda, I am honored to place in your contest ~
Juman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:58 PM
wonderful I love it--Please do check out mines and tell me what you think
La France Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Thank you so much for visiting my poetry and yes I will check out your poetry for sure
Inman Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Lovely, BW.
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:39 PM
Thanks James
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:39 PM
and not fiction
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 3:05 PM
what a vivid write that awakens my senses, constance... beautiful!.. huggs and a soupie!
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Thank you so much Nette for the lovely comment ~
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 2:48 PM
such a beautiful poem and a lovely tribute to a stunning flower - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Thank you sweet Jan ~
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:59 PM
- "Antique Rose" is a representation of my door to my "office" ....... - A beautiful poem, B.W. !!!! - (7) - Luck in contest, the most beautiful flower deserves to win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Anne Lise always so nice when you visit my poetry, thank you ~
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