Anticipation

Await daffodils
colour of sun cheers the soul
imagine spring warmth.
















Anticipation -  Haiku
for John Heck's Twelve for 1 contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 10:19 PM
Very nice, Carol. Love that sunny color!
Mehta Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 2:52 PM
Nice imagery to anticipate spring,here in NC it's round the corner. Carol
Inka Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Im am trying hard to maintain such thoughts. I liked the way the title played perfectly with this haiku's messege. Well done!
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 11:07 AM
definitely warming the soul, carol.. spring beckons!! lovely as you! :) huggs, nette
Pettit Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:49 AM
I'm anticipating these things as well. I'm sick of the winter. Your haiku carries great descriptiveness.
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Good work..Enjoyed ..Here those daffodils are sending up their shoots..Won't be long before we see some early blooms opening...Sara
Smith Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Awww this is just delightful =] love your work as always. Looking forward to reading more. I'm excited for spring as well by the way. Dana'lynn
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