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Anticipation

Await daffodils colour of sun cheers the soul imagine spring warmth. Anticipation - Haiku for John Heck's Twelve for 1 contest

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Date: 2/8/2011 10:19:00 PM
Very nice, Carol. Love that sunny color!
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:52:00 PM
Nice imagery to anticipate spring,here in NC it's round the corner. Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 11:38:00 AM
Im am trying hard to maintain such thoughts. I liked the way the title played perfectly with this haiku's messege. Well done!
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Date: 2/8/2011 11:07:00 AM
definitely warming the soul, carol.. spring beckons!! lovely as you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:49:00 AM
I'm anticipating these things as well. I'm sick of the winter. Your haiku carries great descriptiveness.
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:40:00 AM
Good work..Enjoyed ..Here those daffodils are sending up their shoots..Won't be long before we see some early blooms opening...Sara
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:33:00 AM
Awww this is just delightful =] love your work as always. Looking forward to reading more. I'm excited for spring as well by the way. Dana'lynn
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