Anticipation

held tightly, yet soft
loves embrace with bated breaths
one awaited kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 12, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Nice Haiku, Brandee and thank you for commenting "Days" and congrats...Wishing you a nice weekend...Gert
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June 4, 2010 at 1:55 AM
Hi Brandee, I like the anticipation in this one. well done....Thank you for stopping by and your kind comments...Margaret
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May 17, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Very pretty, best of luck in the contest.. I am sending you a soup mail.. constance
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May 15, 2010 at 4:42 PM
So true. Feels like young love to me. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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May 15, 2010 at 1:32 PM
Wonderful Haiku Brandee and good luck in the new contest.. a great write from the photo ..my entry is "Promessa" Italian for "Promises"...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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