Anticipation

Thoughts keep coming back to that night at sixteen
   when the world sat on the horizon of opportunity
     the immediate lay on the closer side of a horizon
          as blank and wide open
           as opportunities before me.

My flesh burned and floated while watching eternity
                  mapped out 
in the revolving cycle of galaxies  just lighting the sky,

while I witnessed their message millennia gone by.

I was flat on the springs of trampoline stretched from my childhood
      and my closest most inner being was suspended
            above in yards of gravity where the fog drifted
                 and the energy of summer heat
                     blanketed my very being.

There was a thunderstorm brewing, while I anticipated my flight.

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Date: 12/13/2019 5:17:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Tara - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
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Tara Jennings
Date: 1/7/2020 1:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/11/2019 7:43:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Tara
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Date: 1/7/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/11/2019 10:56:00 AM
A very interesting free verse Tara, congrats for placing in my contest, thanks for your entry!
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Date: 1/7/2020 1:03:00 PM
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