Anticipating All the Evening's Fun

It is a darkling night in Union Square
Yet in our hearts 'tis bright as noonday sun
The gloomy mist cannot our high hopes snare
Anticipating all the evening's fun 
We're going to a premiere Broadway play
And meeting all the stars and cast backstage
Then dancing out beneath the Milky Way
To music sweet as wine that's finely aged

We take each other's hands, but something's wrong
Expressions on our faces clammy cold
No matter that the band now plays our song
We're out of cards, and now it's time to fold

We search each other's eyes to find a clue
No mirror in them whispers, 'I love you'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cunningham Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 9:01 AM
Sounds like a very romantic evening Gershon. Tom PS, have Soupmailed you.
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October 21, 2020 at 4:22 AM
This is a profoundly mysterious and majestic read. I love it's intrigue and inspiration. You've outdone yourself with such a powerfully illusive and enchanting poem. I love it. God bless you always
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Very, very kind of you, Regina. Yours are comments to treasure. Thank you! ~ With appreciation, Gershon
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Very deep , Gershon, imagery is great. I had a feel of the Casinos in your verse, that I miss. Enjoyed the story. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:06 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks about this sonnet, Eve. Sweetness and Light, Gershon
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