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ant crawling in the gasket of freezer... chilling out ant seen by me.. short life

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Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 PM
Sara, love both of the haiku,,, yes they have a short life,,, poor poor ants,,, .. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 11:35:00 AM
"a still life scene" I take it Sara.." you should take up painting; I wish I had taken time to try it.." (well done )
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Date: 11/22/2012 10:55:00 AM
This is great, Sara! Like all good haikus, you pack a ton of imagery into a few short lines. I also love the humour of the last part.
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:41:00 AM
Very cool one. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:38:00 AM
this is COOL!!!
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Date: 11/22/2012 5:28:00 AM
Love the line "chilling" out. I anticipated the last line to be "out cold". Very fun read. Great job. Happy Thanksgiving.
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 AM
A very wonderful haiku Sara. I love it. Thank you for sharing! love always, Leonora
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Date: 11/21/2012 1:57:00 PM
This is a very witty write my friend, I'm glad I got to read this one today, it cheered me up! I've has some hard times with school so this is a real nice change of pace! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/21/2012 1:20:00 PM
Hi Sara, love this, great write. Rollo
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Date: 11/21/2012 1:02:00 PM
haha Sara I sure needed a good laugh today .. can see that ant cringing luv .. seems I am only able to view last poems posted by clicking 'read by' above poets name ..oh well .. enjoy turkey day .. hi to Doris too.
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:16:00 AM
This has just made me burst out laughig so thank you for that xx
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:08:00 AM
Oh no, as a inspector of the Ant appreciation league.(aal) i implore you to carry on writing wonderful poetry...
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:31:00 AM
Bam! Good one Sara...BG
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:08:00 AM
A cool poem on the ant chilling out, Sara, enjoyed!! Jag
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:18:00 AM
Very cute--"chilling out". Sara, you gave me a great complement today--it means a lot to me. Your comment tells me something about you--you are the genuine article! Rare in today's world but very very refreshing! You are still very young at heart!
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Date: 11/21/2012 6:03:00 AM
I love it!!! I enjoy reading your Haikus Sara.. I always feel like that about ants!
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