Ant

ant crawling 
in the gasket of freezer...
chilling out

ant seen
by me..
short life

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 PM

Sara, love both of the haiku,,, yes they have a short life,,, poor poor ants,,, .. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/23/2012 11:35:00 AM

"a still life scene" I take it Sara.." you should take up painting; I wish I had taken time to try it.." (well done )

Heather Ober

Date: 11/22/2012 10:55:00 AM

This is great, Sara! Like all good haikus, you pack a ton of imagery into a few short lines. I also love the humour of the last part.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/22/2012 8:41:00 AM

Very cool one. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2012 8:38:00 AM

this is COOL!!!

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/22/2012 5:28:00 AM

Love the line "chilling" out. I anticipated the last line to be "out cold". Very fun read. Great job. Happy Thanksgiving.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 AM

A very wonderful haiku Sara. I love it. Thank you for sharing! love always, Leonora

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/21/2012 1:57:00 PM

This is a very witty write my friend, I'm glad I got to read this one today, it cheered me up! I've has some hard times with school so this is a real nice change of pace! Great Work!!

Rollo West

Date: 11/21/2012 1:20:00 PM

Hi Sara, love this, great write. Rollo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2012 1:02:00 PM

haha Sara I sure needed a good laugh today .. can see that ant cringing luv .. seems I am only able to view last poems posted by clicking 'read by' above poets name ..oh well .. enjoy turkey day .. hi to Doris too.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/21/2012 9:16:00 AM

This has just made me burst out laughig so thank you for that xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/21/2012 9:08:00 AM

Oh no, as a inspector of the Ant appreciation league.(aal) i implore you to carry on writing wonderful poetry...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/21/2012 7:31:00 AM

Bam! Good one Sara...BG

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/21/2012 7:08:00 AM

A cool poem on the ant chilling out, Sara, enjoyed!! Jag

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/21/2012 6:18:00 AM

Very cute--"chilling out". Sara, you gave me a great complement today--it means a lot to me. Your comment tells me something about you--you are the genuine article! Rare in today's world but very very refreshing! You are still very young at heart!