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tripped, punched in the gut slapped in the face, pinched, kicked in the butt - all answers to, “how are you?” what we say is, “I’m fine…”
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Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Heh, heh. You're right, of course. In every language in every corner of the world, 'Everything's fine' makes the sun shine. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Mmm…hmm :)
Ricci Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Exactly... Good Morning Kim. Yes, when life is hard we just answer "I'm fine". Your entry makes us pause. Have a wonderful morning and day. Take Care (smile)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Thanks, Lisa!
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Yes, we tell those little white lies everyday and I wonder if we keep someone else from blessing us with an understanding word of wisdom or help that we were not expecting. Thank you for sharing this and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 1:23 PM
With masterful words and keen perception, Kim, you have crafted a poignant and powerful poem, rich with vivid imagery. Despite any struggles, you remain strong and resilient. Best to you dear friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 3:36 PM
You are always so kind, sweet friend! Hugs ~ Kim
Callus Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 9:58 AM
She puts on a brave face, probably even a smile. Somebody might tell her "chin up ~ grin 'n bear it!". Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 12:50 PM
For sure! Thanks, Paul! ;)
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June 6, 2023 at 8:03 AM
I’m glad to hear it Kim, all is fine with you and you’re keeping the best side out, although I know exactly what you paradoxically mean here, excellently penned, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Thank you, David! :)
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