Keith O.J. Hunt Poet Classicism

Another Winter Star

I awoke to find the tall splendor of the world,
in those cosmic canyons,
shearing darkness ----
in the pallet of some ethereal night;
ancient with desire.....
to Illume the thick shadow of hades itself 

Not death nor mortal doubt
couldst thou flee from me,
mighty as Aphrodite ----
Shooting thy silver smile 
beautiful as heaven's promise!

In your shimmering I see hope,
for the heart which beholds thy majesty 
the world could fade,
yet you remain.....
a friendly face if none should be found,
but you.....
that thou Creator dost reveal;
my soul,
ageless as thee
(am spun from the same loom)

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Phil Capitano March 10, 2017 at 9:02 AM That last line sums it up nicely, we are all stardust. Very well done Keith.

Lisa Ricci March 9, 2017 at 6:15 AM Hello Keith. I found this entry to be poetry in the truest and traditional sense. It is one to be read out loud with expression. Well done throughout.

Tobey Hill March 6, 2017 at 10:25 AM Wonderful write. I look forward to reading more of your art. Keep up the good work!! Thanks for stopping by..TAH Keith O.J. Hunt March 8, 2017 at 9:02 PM Thanks Tobey, glad you enjoyed, hope to hear further comments in the future:-)

Afzal Nusker February 25, 2017 at 2:35 AM A very soulful poem, Keith. I simply love it. Keith O.J. Hunt February 25, 2017 at 8:56 AM Thanks Afazal, I've always been a soulful poet, can't help it!

Doug Vinson February 23, 2017 at 4:32 PM The seasons and the heavens, and an unerring classical bowshot. Sweet, Keith! Keith O.J. Hunt February 23, 2017 at 5:19 PM I love the way you put that Doug! Glad you enjoyed, this poem is certainly one of my finer efforts. God bless

Heidi Sands February 21, 2017 at 6:18 PM Excellent. I love this poem Keith. :) Keith O.J. Hunt February 23, 2017 at 5:17 PM Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your visit!

Laura Leiser February 21, 2017 at 11:30 AM I loved this poem! Especially the last few lines..."that Thou Creator dost reveal; my soul, ageless as Thee (am spun from the same loom). Heavenly, 7+ Keith O.J. Hunt February 21, 2017 at 11:44 AM Thanks Laura! For all the stars twinkle when we watch.... Wishing you a wonderful and eventful day;-)(!)

Charlie Smith February 19, 2017 at 4:39 PM Well done Keith, the old style never looses its charm.. Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 7:20 PM Amen Charlie. Tis true that the old style seems to speak more deeply or metaphysically with some works.

Nette Onclaud February 19, 2017 at 1:48 PM ohh, i am graced by this glimmer of word-light so soothing, keith.. what lovely read!..huggs Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 2:10 PM Thanks nette, I'm glad my star shawn bright for thee! Many hugs back;-)

Richard Lamoureux February 19, 2017 at 12:38 PM This feels like a hymn from a bygone era. Beautiful! Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 1:09 PM Thanks Richard, long time no see brother! Glad you enjoyed, I was quite proud of myself when I etched the last word in this poem. As long as it raises a few poetic smiles it makes it all worth while...

Joseph May February 19, 2017 at 10:16 AM A journey into the cosmos...Beautifully penned Keith Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 1:12 PM Thanks Joseph, it is rather cosmic!

Matthew Anish February 18, 2017 at 11:36 PM Deep and mystical - as poems should be. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 7:16 PM Thanks Matthew, it does have a tinge of Tolkien too perhaps? I agree that poetry is a deep endevour; it is a mirror of the soul. God bless!

Arthur Vaso February 18, 2017 at 10:08 PM Hi there Kieth, such depth here, I just loved the poem! Keith O.J. Hunt February 19, 2017 at 7:12 PM Thanks Arthur, you've always been so respectful and kind to me and my poetry, your taste is exquisite and your verse is always of the highest order. God bless!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2017 at 1:36 PM - A really beautiful poem, Keith !!!! - (I think I've read it 10 times allready :))) ... I can not find the right words to give you a reasonable comments) - PS. I will "fav" it ... this has nothing to do with that you "fav" my poem (giving and receiving) .... - I just love it! - It carries me straight to heaven :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Keith O.J. Hunt February 18, 2017 at 1:55 PM Glad you loved the poem anne-lise(!) When a poet of your caliber reads a poem 10 times it is quite the honor and you've most certainly have made my day! God bless

Robert Lindley February 18, 2017 at 8:56 AM Such beauty, depth and passion in your works my friend! This is yet another gleaming gem in that golden castle of verse you are crafting! A7. And a fav... Robert Lindley February 19, 2017 at 3:00 PM As you should be. Tis why I admire your golden pen so much. You inspire and amaze me with how you craft your verses! Additionally, I get to read and learn from every poem I find that you have presented here! Keith O.J. Hunt February 18, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thanks Robert, I thought you might enjoy this poem, which was a joy to write, I am rather proud of it!