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another sunset

orange sky hanging in the horizon... evening breeze golden sun over the sea... sultry smell another day coming to an end... her slow blinking ================ Placement:10th;(Nov. 2011) Contest:Sunset haiku Sponsor: Irma Linda By:kashinath karmakar

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Date: 11/14/2011 3:43:00 PM
I'm surprised I never commented on before...but well done and congrats on your win...luv shannon
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:38:00 PM
Congrats Kash on another brilliant win my friend..with super dynamic words of expression which impress .. always luv..
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:54:00 AM
Many congrats on your contest win - regards Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:28:00 AM
Very, very lovely portrait of sunset, Kash. Love the way you describe the breeze and the smell of the sea. The last line is very creative, giving "personality" to the setting sun. Best wishes in the Sunset contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:26:00 AM
soft smile..guess it did not hurt to take a second pass at them aye? HUZZAH! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:31:00 AM
kash congrats on your win, great triplet..David
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:14:00 AM
soup mail...
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:04:00 PM
KASH~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/7/2011 9:03:00 PM
Kash, these are very nice, but that last one. WOW. that one is really haiku-like! Love it.
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:02:00 PM
Very nice images in this piece... love the start and the finish... wonderful write my friend....Michael
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Date: 11/7/2011 12:50:00 PM
Viva another sunset! I love the image you gave of her slow blinking under that sunset. ~ECMc
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Date: 11/7/2011 12:34:00 PM
Time to sit face to face..
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